The cymbals of the drums could use some mastering (somewhat lacked power and volume) to higher its presence.
Loved the lead guitar, although I was expecting a heavier solo, it still sounded really sweet not to mention the great blending of the rhythm. guitar!
Vocals and bass was pretty flawless in its own right to be honest. Vocals sometime felt a bit cluttered together with the guitars though,
can't put my finger on how to mix that out better, but just slightly - it still sounded good, merely a nit-pick. Whispers at 2:33 was fucking sexy!
Not a big fan of the genre in general, mostly because I found this sort of drum-playing rather boring, but you pulled it off nicely!
Just keep working on the mixing and it will sound great
Also, the synth was really out of place. Not the notes, but basically the tune. Would probably have sounded better with, let's say, classic piano?
Oh well, all in all it sounded pretty sweet. Nice to see there are other musicians on this site,
especially in this sort of genre!
(personally plays the drums in a metalcore-band.)