Pan: The start seems awkward although I do see what you're trying to sync. I think at the Alto scene(both) you could add a light flash and a sharp zoom out to the beat to add some impact. The Ranka scene right after is good and how about masking IN the scene of Alto swinging his head around? Just a few frames at the start and you can fade it in too. Also shorten that scene a bit because even with the white fade out it drags on for a bit too long. Also I think the blur at 0:06 doesn't quite fit and the lipsync with Ranka after the kissing scene seems kinda random because you didn't lipsync anything else but the ending is definitely much better.
If you're stumped for scenes with good movement, how about using some of the ones where Alto is fighting in space? I remember there's quite a few good ones where he's fighting and Ranka/Sheryl are singing. Those might come in handy for some beat sync.
