x2. Most of your zooms felt kinda awkward and sharp, like it kinda didn't fit the flow.Your scene selection and pacing was great though, especially when the music kicks in around 0:25 onwards. For the part before 0:25 I think a slower pacing with more emotional and facial scenes to set the mood might be better.AllyKatAVR wrote:I need to get more involved with this MEP, I've been MIA for way too long ^^;
JadeCharm: the quick zooms from :10-:15 kind of confuse me a little. I wanna think they're meant to fall on beat, but there isn't a zoom for every beat there. Maybe they're following the lyrics? I can kind of see it doing that at :14, but the quick zoom right before it at :13 forces me to think its for the beat again. Other than that, I really love the track
iCardioid: This was definitely better than your first beta. Having one couple makes it easier and simpler for the viewer and I think it's looking quite nice so far. Your pacing is really slow though so try having more scenes, just simple cuts to the beats would work. And also your zooms are looking quite funny, they feel awkward, try removing them or lengthen out the keyframes a little and see if that helps. ^^
