Since you asked me to be detailed:
In your track according to scene selection, the two girls are in love with the guy, you start showing it correctly, until in the song I listen "until over you" and you just show the girl, which kinda confuses according to the previous scenes (?)
About effects, it's ok that your track doesn't have too much effects rather than the few transitions I could notice. We don't want the audience to get easily bored by just putting flashes
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I'll not mention other facts cause the crowd has already mentioned them.
Ok, now I'll focus in the beta
Flow:
Video makes senses until this moment. The scene selection goes very well through the betas and goes according to the music. Nothing more to add exceptiong for the transitions:
1) Mystyk - Aimo
I believe here we have to do something. Crossfade is not appropiate according to the first scene of Aimo, still Mystyk has to do something for the final scenes of her beta. Fades aren't also appropiate here, so an option is to create the transition using scenes from both animes, or a mask transition
2) Aimo - Riccardo
Ironically, the crossfade seems appropiate here. Flash or fades doesn't make sense here, and making a transition is not required. The illuminations between Aimo's part and Riccardo's part are appropiate, so the crossfade seems ok even when first scene of Riccardo's moves so fast
3) Riccardo - EvaFan
Hmm, considering first scene of Eva's and final from Riccardo, this might be a troublesome moment for transition. Crossfade might not help nor fades or flash
4) EvaFan - Tritio
Well we have to wait until a new transition is made, but seems to work the idea of zoom out
5) Tritio - Code
Here the only possible option is Crossfade, in Tritio's part, final scene moves to the sky and first scene of Code is quiet, so a little adjusment of the crossfade might seemed to work.
Note: Code, if you're reading this, try to adjust the brightness of the first seconds so that it can really give an idea that the video moved from night to day
6) Code - FadingSundown
Ok this will be another moment a new transition will be required. Fading, if you're reading, please in the beginning of your part try to beat all the synchs in the beginning, it doesn't matter if you miss somes during the beta but the beginning is crucial according to the way Code ends his part, my man, that's the reason I told you that the final part of your beta should be intense, but that was because I didn't know the beginning of Fading's part included that intensity in the audio. Transition according to the audio, should be more like 2-3 seconds (2:59-3:01)
7) Fading - Hitori
Crossfades seems appropiate, it actually fusions perfectly between final and beginning. Nothing to add here
8) Hitori - Melyora
Ok, crossfade seems not work here. But by judging the first scene of Melyora, she seems like she's watching to a distant point, perhaps you guys should look whether if there's a scene where the girl in Melyora's part is really looking something, like a Tv or something that gives that impression. I believe is the best according to the final scene of Hitori's part
9) Melyora - Hitori
Again, crossfade doesn't work here, but a good option might be using a blur-right or left transition, for some reason that might help here, I dunno why but I got that impression
10) Hitori - ibabrak
And ironically, the crossfade seems appropiate here, and it doesn't matter if it's short, it's good this way, cause the way ibabrak's part begins doesn't require a long transition
btw, excellent final scene for your part ibabrak
Ok, these are some suggestions for the MEP, it's up to the members if they want to keep them in mind :3
I just haven't made a new one yet
I'm assuming it's the boy but that makes the scene of the brunette at 0:09 and 0:13 quite weird because it should really be showing the boy and not the girl. And also the ending shouldn't that be the grey haired girl looking depressed and not the brunette? I'm a little lost because I don't know who's POV you're showing. XD
Everybody's tracks look great so far! :3 But the overlays in the Ah My Goddess part is a little too bright, maybe just lighten it a tiny bit. You might want to make a longer crossfade from Tritio and Code's track. Oh and I totally LOL'd at 2:02. XD
