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Cyber-EG
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Osmose

Post by Cyber-EG » Tue Dec 13, 2011 11:44 am

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Here's my participation for Akross 2011. Enjoy !

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Re: Osmose

Post by CodeZTM » Tue Dec 13, 2011 12:32 pm

Well, that was certainly entertaining. 4 completely different art styles and genres melding together. :)

I think you did a good job capturing the mood of the song. The anime did a good job fitting this really well, and the scene selection was extremely well executed. The fight scenes worked well, and the crossover battles came across well and natural. Especially when you’d axe a character and got down to just the two remaining left alive. What I really liked is how the direction of the shots really matched well with the direction that they were actually going.

If I had any suggestions, it would be from the still arts that you used to show the remaining players. To me, the second one (with Black Lagoon and Garden of Sinners) just didn’t have the same impact as the first one.

The other suggestion was the death of the gunslinger girl character. To me, it wasn’t highlighted well enough. I assume that the Garden of Sinners character killed her, but there weren’t any cuts or blood to bring that across. She just sort of flopped down and got out.

Overall, I highly recommend and felt like it was a really strong conceptual piece and highly entertaining. :up:

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Re: Osmose

Post by TritioAFB » Tue Dec 13, 2011 1:02 pm

Mister, you never stop surprising me :)

While I have my doubts about the clip being a char. profile (I don't read the description just to see if videos did their purpose) you managed to keep the action during the clip. I'll mention more soon :wink:
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Re: Osmose

Post by MimS » Tue Dec 13, 2011 1:13 pm

I know you'll amaze everybody soon or later :)
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Re: Osmose

Post by TritioAFB » Tue Dec 13, 2011 2:49 pm

MimS wrote:I know you'll amaze everybody soon or later :)
Isn't he already doing it? :wink:
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Re: Osmose

Post by Cyber-EG » Sat Dec 17, 2011 12:29 pm

CodeZTM wrote:Overall, I highly recommend and felt like it was a really strong conceptual piece and highly entertaining.
Perhaps there was another way to show the remaining players, you're not the only one to say this.
Otherwise, your review was very interesting to read, thanks :D
TritioAFB wrote:While I have my doubts about the clip being a char. profile (I don't read the description just to see if videos did their purpose) you managed to keep the action during the clip. I'll mention more soon :wink:
Well, some people saw in it a mix of character profiles, but to say the truth I've never really cared about the genres haha
Thanks for the comment again !
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Re: Osmose

Post by nihilant01 » Sun Dec 18, 2011 4:30 am

I liked it :). Good song choice, I felt it was perfect for the subjet of this amv.
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Re: Osmose

Post by Cyber-EG » Mon Dec 19, 2011 2:23 pm

Thanks :up:

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Re: Osmose

Post by Mol » Tue Dec 20, 2011 7:00 pm

Nice mix and fine cuts ,not bad. :up:
Still better than that MMO.
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