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Luper
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What was promised is now left forgotten

Post by Luper » Mon Jan 09, 2012 2:20 pm


For the people looking for the song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mcExlu3NQaY

Im new to this site, and i recently made a new AMV and i want to know about your opinions.
good? bad? maybe some tips? :3

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Re: What was promised is now left forgotten

Post by Kireblue » Tue Jan 10, 2012 2:41 pm

The pace and flow of this video was absolutely perfect, but it didn't have any focus. You kept switching between completely unrelated events, and didn't seem to make any effort to tie them together.

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Re: What was promised is now left forgotten

Post by Luper » Tue Jan 10, 2012 6:07 pm

kireblue wrote:The pace and flow of this video was absolutely perfect, but it didn't have any focus. You kept switching between completely unrelated events, and didn't seem to make any effort to tie them together.
yeah i kinda agree with you..
But this was a small edit that i made, at first i wanted story but then later on i lost inspiration to the song if you get what i mean ^^
but thanks for the comment
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Re: What was promised is now left forgotten

Post by Magnus » Tue Jan 10, 2012 8:01 pm

Ceruleonz sounds cooler than edgerain |:>

Checkar videon senare, och läste ditt pm - tack för supporten <3
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Re: What was promised is now left forgotten

Post by Enigma » Tue Jan 10, 2012 8:11 pm

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Re: What was promised is now left forgotten

Post by gotegenks » Tue Jan 10, 2012 9:02 pm

toooo slow for the most part, and i wish that meant that the pace picked up, but nope. The pace was so inconsistent, it was slow, then fast, then slow again, and then what? overall it felt really slow and the fast parts made the video inconsistent and made it seem cheap (or maybe the slow parts...) and the zooms, shakes, and saturation effects did not fit at all and like kire said it was so random, the scene selection was really uninspired and whatever. like, little to no impact there, but cool song

and you should stick with ceruleonz btw.
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Re: What was promised is now left forgotten

Post by Luper » Wed Jan 11, 2012 4:07 am

Magnus wrote:Ceruleonz sounds cooler than edgerain |:>

Checkar videon senare, och läste ditt pm - tack för supporten <3
haha nah edgerain is way cooler :D
Okiees :3
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Re: What was promised is now left forgotten

Post by LeX » Wed Jan 11, 2012 6:55 am

:aimkissyface:

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