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KitsunesAMV · Post by **KitsunesAMV** » Wed Mar 07, 2012 1:47 am

Been working on this for awhile and I have to say that i think it came out pretty nicely i know I dont really introduce the characters very well or have a great pacing well I think that's alright I like the way it came out overall and I hope someone enjoys

TEKnician · Post by **TEKnician** » Wed Mar 07, 2012 11:43 am

Not bad! That was actually pretty enjoyable. Though the beginning was hard to follow cuz I never saw this series. The build up was nice and got more intense towards the end. I thought it was just gonna be a super short AMV, but it seemed longer.

The ending was very appropriate. Maybe if the video began a little differently, this would be AWESOME.

overall: 3.9/5

KitsunesAMV · Post by **KitsunesAMV** » Wed Mar 07, 2012 11:36 pm

Hey thanks a lot I really appreciate your opinion anyway maybe you can tell me what I should do right in the future ?

TEKnician · Post by **TEKnician** » Wed Mar 07, 2012 11:57 pm

Maybe working on transitions might be good. You could've used a few quick crossfades here and there. You could also practice action-syncing more, too. Not that they were BAD, but some movements were slightly off-sync with the beat. Since there were a HELL OF A LOT OF PUNCHES

it felt...i dunno...all over the place(?)

What you did good was: You told a Story and it made sense. Keep that mentality. I can see how this could've been just one of those "here's people fighting, they get pwn'd, the main character is cool" type of AMVs. Therefore, I liked it. Now I know what the anime was about

If you want to do something ~~right~~ different, try a song that has lyrics that matches an anime you watch. (e.g. "Pirate Song" and One Piece. Make sense?) Other than that, I really won't tell someone exactly how they should edit afterwards, but I'll always see it from a different perspective.

Was this your first video, BTW?

KitsunesAMV · Post by **KitsunesAMV** » Fri Mar 09, 2012 12:19 am

Thanks and with the action sync I don't agree very much the timing is not off if i check the files but some parts not intended to be matched might be off for that reason but thank you anyway ill try to do better next time and no this is not my first video although its my third on the org

gotegenks · Post by **gotegenks** » Fri Mar 09, 2012 3:06 pm

bro, i told you the same thing about timing. this is where the critical eye comes into play. It doesn't really matter if you intended it to be that way, what matters is if you achieved the effect you were going for on people. If you were trying to make people feel like the timing was off (thereby annoying them), then that's another story, but i don't think you were. Just listen to him, look at your video and see where your timing could be improved, or how the tactics you were using could be improved so that it doesn't come off in an unfavorable way, maybe that means you STOP making the timing off on purpose so you can achieve your larger goals and make a better video.

i dont agree with what you said about the song choice though, tek. i do believe there are completely inappropriate song choices for animes, (though you can put anything together with the right amount of editing) but this was a song choice i could really get into, and it also helped to modernize the source a little, and really enabled him to illustrate the story like he did so effectively. besides, there are enough amvs with hacky song choices as it is (e.g. Pirate Song" and One Piece. Make sense?)

anyway, 3/5, start listening to people and stop discrediting your own video in your description...it's really lame.

TEKnician · Post by **TEKnician** » Fri Mar 09, 2012 6:48 pm

Wait, what did i say that don't you agree with?

I'm confused. Did I say something wrong?

gotegenks · Post by **gotegenks** » Fri Mar 09, 2012 7:34 pm

TEKnician wrote: If you want to do something ~~right~~ different, try a song that has lyrics that matches an anime you watch. (e.g. "Pirate Song" and One Piece. Make sense?) Other than that, I really won't tell someone exactly how they should edit afterwards, but I'll always see it from a different perspective.

i also disagree about this being his first amv

TEKnician · Post by **TEKnician** » Fri Mar 09, 2012 8:46 pm

My intended message was to suggest something different to do.

Maybe my example was bad, but I suggested that he make an AMV using a song with lyrics.

P.S. the word "right" was crossed out

gotegenks · Post by **gotegenks** » Fri Mar 09, 2012 9:14 pm

but by mentioning it you were kinda implying it would be an improvement over this, which it wouldn't necessarily. What dumbfuck doesn't know that using songs with lyrics is an option?

p.s. why'd you even put it in there then? .-.

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