#Chronicle.AMV Project [FINISHED] [IN ANNOUNCEMENTS FORUM!]

[CodeZTM]

Sending you a very short scene beta. I'm going to add some action motion to it later in after effects, but this is more or less a "Does this scenery/pacing match the rest of the project" kind of thing.

If anyone else would like to see, please let me know.

[FadingSundown]

I would like to see it too Code :3. I haven't seen the other MEP parts (the finals), so I can't say if it fits. I dont even know if mine will fit with the rest >.<.

[TwilightChrono]

Sending you a very short scene beta. I'm going to add some action motion to it later in after effects, but this is more or less a "Does this scenery/pacing match the rest of the project" kind of thing.

If anyone else would like to see, please let me know.

It looks like you are going for the Star Wars Black And Red Dark-Side look from what I can tell. With a heavy emphasis on Bright colors. Or that could just be your amazing fucking script you have rocking in this. I love the color contrast. Play on that. It has a real nice feel to it and I think it will look good in the grand scheme of the part.

I would like to see it too Code :3. I haven't seen the other MEP parts (the finals), so I can't say if it fits. I dont even know if mine will fit with the rest >.<.

I was blown away by this track. I personally don't see anything wrong with it, but I tend to be nice when it comes to a lot of things. To me it seems to fit with the theme and the style I am trying to achieve for the MEP.

Before I say anything in regards to it being a final and such I would like to hear the opinions from everyone else. I myself don't see anythign wrong with it. I love the flow and the source itself looks amazing. I'll wait to hear other thoughts then I will re-review it based on those thoughts and give my final opinion.

Be sur eto speak your minds about each others parts here in the thread and not through PM's. I want everyone to be able to provide input on everyone's beta and I want everyone to be able to see everyone's thoughts on each others beta's.

And with that. I wait for replies.

[AngelDragoon]

@TwilightChrono: Alrighty, I'll work on getting a few minor things tweaked and then I'll send the final your way!

@Code: I would like to see it!

@FadingSundown: Really good track! I really had to stare at it to see if there was anything wrong, lol. The only two things I can think of is the slight banding on some of the clips, (which may just be caused by the mp4 rendering, so not that big of a deal there), and the lipflap at 17-18 seconds. It just really stands out from the rest of the track.

[Warlocket]

@Code: I'd like to see it too

@FadingSundown: Loved your track. The only part that bugged me was the lipflap that AngelDragoon mentioned, but other than that it looks good to me.

[TwilightChrono]

Hey guys. I just finished making the MEP's banner.

Let me know what you think. It's posted here and now on the front page at the beginning of the OP!!



I also sent out my BETA to everyone as well.

Let me know your thoughts here in the thread.

[MystykAMV]

TC: I think the zoom at the beginning is too much and too fast
at 0:06 you could add a little flash maybe or a zoom or both? there is a big beat there and you didn't emphasize it so that's why.
0:11 and 0:12 - I think you should remove that transition, a kind of slide or whatever that is

0:10 and 0:11 - there were some beats that could have been emphasized more

that's it I guess, nice track!

Edit: oh and also, I'm sorry for being late, but I'll give you beta next week >.< I'll have a break so please await for it sometime next week.

[CodeZTM]

I'll echo what MystyK said, but I think you did a nice job with it.

[TwilightChrono]

TC: I think the zoom at the beginning is too much and too fast

K. I'll get right on that.

at 0:06 you could add a little flash maybe or a zoom or both? there is a big beat there and you didn't emphasize it so that's why.

Doesn't leave a lot of room for a flash but i'll see what I can do.The scene there wsa her jerking out of her sleep to the lyric "Try Not To Wake Me"

0:11 and 0:12 - I think you should remove that transition, a kind of slide or whatever that is

It's the best transition I could find that goes well with the mask of her standing up. I'll try and look for something different then.

0:10 and 0:11 - there were some beats that could have been emphasized more

They were all emphasized o_0? You didn't notice a hand go through her stomach then the pivit of scenes to the "al-al-a-a-all I see" lyric? And I even hit it to the "duhduh-duh-duhduh" beat right before it and after with a short fade to black followed by the mask and slides. If I "Empahsize" anymore beats there It'll be massive over-synching. I think that part is fine as is. But I'll do something about the slides.

that's it I guess, nice track!

Glad you enjoyed it.

Edit: oh and also, I'm sorry for being late, but I'll give you beta next week >.< I'll have a break so please await for it sometime next week

Roger

[Warlocket]

@TwilightChrono
Banner and track both look good to me