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Re: CascadaThon 3-WE NOW HAVE BANNER AND SIG. GET YOUR SIG N

Post by AimoAio » Wed Jul 25, 2012 7:14 pm

CodeZTM wrote:@icard: good pacing and I like where you went, but I think that the white flashing (and the black space in the early bit of the track) could be removed and make it move a tad more smoothly. Maybe more scene variety in the first15 seconds too? I think repeat facial shots are hurting the flow of the AMV. Maybe more action and less static? Still, really cool! I didn't know about this card anime. I may need to check it out!
x2. And for 0:15 when it splits into the boxes, I feel like it should change scenes at the first beat before it expands. The positioning of the boxes could also be straightened a bit since it feels like they're being scaled at different rates. Oh and a gradual fade to black&white might help with the mood too. I'm not too sure about the lipsync at 0:26 either....but otherwise the energy is really great and upbeat and I'm liking it so far. ^^

Inan (denpa track) : Hmm the slide is better than the hard cut but I'm still not a fan of it. I still think something better can be used instead. Or a fade out even. xD

Inan (skip beat track) : I really like this one. (AWW YEAH SKIP BEAT!! <3) The mask at 0:26 might look more natural if you add a thin black stroke to the edges though.

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Re: CascadaThon 3-WE NOW HAVE BANNER AND SIG. GET YOUR SIG N

Post by Inan » Thu Jul 26, 2012 9:28 am

Thanks for the critique guys if you guys have any other suggestions ill be glad to hear them since ill be doing some more editing this weekend

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Re: CascadaThon 3-WE NOW HAVE BANNER AND SIG. GET YOUR SIG N

Post by TwilightChrono » Thu Jul 26, 2012 3:41 pm

Heyo guys.

I figured since I have to start over on my C3 track anyway, i'll just go ahead and use the beta I sent you guys a while back as a rejected C3 track and upload it to my youtube channel. I would like to start garnering some interest in the MEP from people like the past two.

So i fyou gusy have beta's you guys have made but wound up rejecting, feel free to upload those to yoru YT's as rejected tracks. Just title it CascadaThon 3 Rejected Track. As stated, I would like to start getting some interest in the MEP going before the premiere.

Anywho, justr letting you guys know.

I should have a new full beta fo you guys soon.
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Re: CascadaThon 3-WE NOW HAVE BANNER AND SIG. GET YOUR SIG N

Post by Inan » Thu Jul 26, 2012 5:42 pm

guys, im bored of editing with this blue haired anime girl, so im thinking of switching to macross, or mix them idk yet

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Re: CascadaThon 3-WE NOW HAVE BANNER AND SIG. GET YOUR SIG N

Post by TwilightChrono » Thu Jul 26, 2012 7:03 pm

Inan wrote:guys, im bored of editing with this blue haired anime girl, so im thinking of switching to macross, or mix them idk yet
Hmm. try and mix them and see how that comes out. Denpa was a good series. I wouldn't dismiss it just yet.
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Re: CascadaThon 3-WE NOW HAVE BANNER AND SIG. GET YOUR SIG N

Post by Kousaka » Thu Jul 26, 2012 8:52 pm

Thanks for the critique, everyone! I'll start working on it right away! 8D Also, since Code mentioned it, everyone who hasn't seen Cardfight!! Vanguard should watch it. It's a little boring at the beginning, but it gradually gets better.

Inan, the only thing I didn't like about the betas was the sliding effects. I just think they need a little work, not necessarily taken out altogether. And if you're bored of editing with that show, definitely mix them. I really think Denpa fit, and doesn't need to be changed.
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Re: CascadaThon 3-WE NOW HAVE BANNER AND SIG. GET YOUR SIG N

Post by -Kyros- » Fri Jul 27, 2012 4:43 pm

I had some problems at home :cry:
Tomorrow I give an opinion on various tracks released
Sorry :uhoh:
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Re: CascadaThon 3-WE NOW HAVE BANNER AND SIG. GET YOUR SIG N

Post by -Kyros- » Sat Jul 28, 2012 5:19 pm

@Code

I liked your track a bit slightly yaoi :shock:
I do not like the lip flaps at 0:17 and maybe towards at the end needs more impact scenes (maybe you could use a bit of pan crop) or add a scene of explosion

@iCardioidAMV

Beautiful even your
I did not like the black part at 0:12, even the scene from 0:15 to 0:20 and at certain points I have noticed some ghosting

@Inan

Beta 1 : now flows better :D , at 0:10 maybe creates a linear passage

Beta 2 : I really enjoyed this track :ying: and I have nothing to report
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Re: CascadaThon 3-WE NOW HAVE BANNER AND SIG. GET YOUR SIG N

Post by -Kyros- » Tue Jul 31, 2012 11:46 am

@SatoshiSakura

Not Bad
I don't like the part that goes from 0:00 to 0:13.
I think you have to concentrate more to select the most dynamic scenes rather than effects (the change in brightness don't like) , from 0:13 to 0:20 the selection is good :D , at the other end tries to undertake action scenes (and maybe you do spend some scenes of the kiss)
You are attentive to Aspect Ratio looks like you got a source in 720x480 , is you do not know how to dispose of black vertical edges I'll explain how to do
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Re: CascadaThon 3-WE NOW HAVE BANNER AND SIG. GET YOUR SIG N

Post by SatoshiSakura » Tue Jul 31, 2012 12:14 pm

-Kyros- wrote:@SatoshiSakura

Not Bad
I don't like the part that goes from 0:00 to 0:13.
I think you have to concentrate more to select the most dynamic scenes rather than effects (the change in brightness don't like) , from 0:13 to 0:20 the selection is good :D , at the other end tries to undertake action scenes (and maybe you do spend some scenes of the kiss)
You are attentive to Aspect Ratio looks like you got a source in 720x480 , is you do not know how to dispose of black vertical edges I'll explain how to do
All right, I'll try and get those worked out, thanks!
Wow, sorry, I completely missed that 720x480, that's what happens when I edit late at night. :sweat:

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