[Big Contest 2014] Monarch by Iren S.S.

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Iren S.S.
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Re: [Big Contest 2014] Monarch by Iren S.S.

Post by Iren S.S. » Mon Jun 09, 2014 8:59 am

Gene Starwind 21122 wrote:I loved the video. I left a review on it. Just the timing, the feel of the video through out the whole thing was great. Then as I'm watching I was like this feels like some type of weird dream, and then the ending was like well that just happened.

Nice work!

Gene Starwind 21122
WOW! Thank you! I'm very happy you felt it ^^
imp wrote:pretty colours! good job!
Thank you!!! :ying:

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Re: [Big Contest 2014] Monarch by Iren S.S.

Post by Shui » Mon Jun 09, 2014 2:30 pm

This was weird. For me it felt as if the Song/Anime combination was a really really bad choice. Concept seemed like an excuse to edit random shit :P
Cuts aren't bad I guess but nothing out of the ordinary. It isn't a keeper. 2/5
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Re: [Big Contest 2014] Monarch by Iren S.S.

Post by Iren S.S. » Tue Jun 10, 2014 8:24 am

Shui wrote:This was weird. For me it felt as if the Song/Anime combination was a really really bad choice. Concept seemed like an excuse to edit random shit :P
Cuts aren't bad I guess but nothing out of the ordinary. It isn't a keeper. 2/5
Yay~ You're the only one who got it right. Yes, you are absolutely right, dammit :D
Thanks for the comment! :awesome:

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Re: [Big Contest 2014] Monarch by Iren S.S.

Post by CrackTheSky » Tue Jun 10, 2014 4:08 pm

I thought the video was okay. I kinda take the same view as Shui; the ending felt tacked on, like an excuse to do something nonsensical. Weird for the sake of weird is okay in my book, there's no need to necessarily explain it. In fact I probably would have liked the video a little better without the "explanation" at the end, but that's just me.

Editing-wise it was good; nothing particularly stood out but it held my attention. I have a really hard time getting into AMVs that use classical music, though -- there are very few out there that I really enjoy -- so I probably won't be rewatching this any time soon.

Still, it's a nice enough video. 3/5

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Re: [Big Contest 2014] Monarch by Iren S.S.

Post by [key]Scarlet » Tue Jun 10, 2014 4:54 pm

I really liked it! Even if it's random, I could understand something :shark:
Good luck in Big Contest!

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Re: [Big Contest 2014] Monarch by Iren S.S.

Post by Iren S.S. » Wed Jun 11, 2014 7:52 am

CrackTheSky wrote:I thought the video was okay. I kinda take the same view as Shui; the ending felt tacked on, like an excuse to do something nonsensical. Weird for the sake of weird is okay in my book, there's no need to necessarily explain it. In fact I probably would have liked the video a little better without the "explanation" at the end, but that's just me.

Editing-wise it was good; nothing particularly stood out but it held my attention. I have a really hard time getting into AMVs that use classical music, though -- there are very few out there that I really enjoy -- so I probably won't be rewatching this any time soon.

Still, it's a nice enough video. 3/5
Thanks for the opinion! That's really-really great that people have different understandings of this, because it would be boring to hear the same from everybody.
One of the reasons I ended the vid like this is that I wanted to generate the feeling of duality in viewers' minds, so that they could think over it themselves and try to draw their own conclusions.

Anyways, thank you again :)
[key]Scarlet wrote:I really liked it! Even if it's random, I could understand something :shark:
Good luck in Big Contest!
Whoa, thank you! I'm glad you liked it!!
And I wish you good luck too! :awesome:

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Um, actually, I would like to point out a thing which, I hope, will make the whole thing a little clearer to the viewers. The point is that the vid is not as random as it may seem at the first glance. There's a logical chain of "events" and images which start joining into one whole at the moment, when the train enters the tunnel. If you look carefully, you can see several details which make you understand that the dream is "telling" a particular story which takes place in a particular surroundings. Those details come together and intensify to the extent of a colourful messy nightmare, which is the climax of the whole thing.
Speaking of the beginning of the vid, where the most randomish things take place, I can only tell you that here I followed the "dreamy" pattern. Just try to remember one of your own dreams and you'll see what I mean. The nightmares usually have a blurred and unclear beginning and only in the middle of the dream or in the end the faces, events and things become understandable and, eventually, horrible.

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Re: [Big Contest 2014] Monarch by Iren S.S.

Post by MatthewRoy » Wed Jun 11, 2014 10:20 am

For a dream it makes more sense for it to be unclear and hard to understand. You did well at just hinting something.. my only problem was the lack of connection with the guy at the end. Maybe with somebody waking up in first person point of view it would have worked better.

But 5 seconds at the end take nothing away from the rest. It's like the only video I rewatched from the contest so far. I hope you get some recognition.
Shui wrote:This was weird. For me it felt as if the Song/Anime combination was a really really bad choice.
I think it's a really good choice. I feel like classic music is hard to use, since with no lyrics it gives little ground to create a link between sound and images.. but here you have something really abstract, it works. And the song is used well to give a weird/disturbing feeling

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Re: [Big Contest 2014] Monarch by Iren S.S.

Post by Kitty-Galia » Wed Jun 11, 2014 11:54 am

Good job, Iren! Very interesting AMV :3
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Re: [Big Contest 2014] Monarch by Iren S.S.

Post by Iren S.S. » Thu Jun 12, 2014 9:15 am

MatthewRoy wrote:For a dream it makes more sense for it to be unclear and hard to understand. You did well at just hinting something.. my only problem was the lack of connection with the guy at the end. Maybe with somebody waking up in first person point of view it would have worked better.

But 5 seconds at the end take nothing away from the rest. It's like the only video I rewatched from the contest so far. I hope you get some recognition.
Shui wrote:This was weird. For me it felt as if the Song/Anime combination was a really really bad choice.
I think it's a really good choice. I feel like classic music is hard to use, since with no lyrics it gives little ground to create a link between sound and images.. but here you have something really abstract, it works. And the song is used well to give a weird/disturbing feeling
Thanks for a reply! It's great you liked it.

Well, in fact there shouldn't have been any connection, since I wanted to create a sharp contrast between reality and the dream. But, anyways, thanks for the opinion. I appreciate it ^^
Kitty-Galia wrote:Good job, Iren! Very interesting AMV :3
Thank you!! <3

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Re: [Big Contest 2014] Monarch by Iren S.S.

Post by Bajak » Sat Jun 14, 2014 6:13 am

This is my favorite amv now ^__^
I can't explain in details why this is awesome. I'm just addicted to this amv ;D
And looking forward to your next masterpieces :3
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