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Sailor Moon BETA

Post by pan_dbgt01 » Thu Oct 16, 2014 10:26 pm


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Re: Sailor Moon BETA

Post by UnluckyArtist » Fri Oct 17, 2014 9:29 am

Um I left a :pizza:

Try to finish plz

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Re: Sailor Moon BETA

Post by blaksun » Fri Oct 17, 2014 1:57 pm

i will give you my 2 cents
UnluckyArtist wrote:Try to finish plz
X2
Text endless companions so foe raid ones and even less that makes sense :)

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Re: Sailor Moon BETA

Post by pan_dbgt01 » Fri Oct 17, 2014 2:02 pm

blaksun wrote:i will give you my 2 cents
UnluckyArtist wrote:Try to finish plz
X2
I'm glad you guys like it.

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Re: Sailor Moon BETA

Post by The_McLaughlin » Fri Oct 17, 2014 2:17 pm

Flows pretty well you should finish it. Though at about 1:41ish (I'm on my phone since my pc is pre occupied oreping footage so time codes are a bit more difficult since there is no way to make it stay up unless I'm constantly tapping the video) when Salior Luna (blonde hair chick, not 100 percent sure if thats her name) raises her hand it kind of glitches a bit like a fragment of the clip repeats itself. Maybe it's just me, but you might want to check it and see if you can make that motion a bit smoother. Otherwise it looks good and like I said appears to flow really well.

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