Zabuza Appears! + The end of the fight?

[papacheese]

Hi there. I'm new in this site and this is my first AMV, it's also my first edited video ever. I always wanted to make an AMV, and I'm happy and proud of this one, even when I know is not good, I mean, it will not be good in the first try.
Sorry my bad english.

Video: Zabuza Appears!
Category: Action, Instrumental
Anime: Naruto
Song: Kill Ratio
Artist: Sonic Mayhem
Creator: papacheese


Thank you for reading this, and if you don't watch my AMV it's ok, you should watch what you want to watch!


EDIT:

This is my second one. I think it's better done than the previous one but it still needs something, a sense, a meaning. But here it is, I tried to not make the mistakes I made with the fist one. I hope you enjoy it.


Video: The end of the fight?
You can watch it here too if you want (if they don't take it down because of copyright): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V8KeAL7hMrk
Category: Action, Instrumental
Anime: Naruto
Song: Quad Machine
Artist: Sonic Mayhem
Creator: papacheese

[seasons]

I like that this was a very clean-looking AMV, and that you went for something simple instead of trying to do too much right off the bat. I like this song, too. This kind of instrumental rock goes well with Naruto.

This got off to a very slow start and the cuts weren't on the beat or timed with the music well until about the halfway point. This was a decent action AMV but having seen this episode, I'm not sure this AMV really adds anything to it or does anything new with it. I wasn't sure what to think by the end. Were they all killed?

[papacheese]

Thanks for watching seasons!

I like that this was a very clean-looking AMV, and that you went for something simple instead of trying to do too much right off the bat. I like this song, too. This kind of instrumental rock goes well with Naruto.

Thank you! I didn't want to do something too complex because it's my first try.

This got off to a very slow start and the cuts weren't on the beat or timed with the music well until about the halfway point.

You are right, I have to put more effort to the cuts, it's really hard.

This was a decent action AMV but having seen this episode, I'm not sure this AMV really adds anything to it or does anything new with it. I wasn't sure what to think by the end. Were they all killed?

I didn't think about this. Now that you mention it, I have to try to add something to it, give it a meaning or something, I know what you mean but I can't explain
I think I chose "Kill Ratio" from Sonic Mayhem because it's a powerful song, the title of the song doesn't give it the meaning I wanted to give it (omg it's so hard to explain in english).

I guess I just wanted to show how awesome Zabuza is, in the way I see it.

Again, thanks for watching and commenting, and I'm sorry I can't explain myself.

[seasons]

I think you explained yourself just fine. You speak (type?) English better than most people online.

[papacheese]

Thank you seasons

[papacheese]

I edited the post and added a new video. I hope it's ok to make this comment. I edited the post because of the one-post-per-week limit.