kireblue wrote:I like the source paring, but I don't really feel that it was executed as well as it could have been. Using Ene was a really good idea, but I feel that the scenes that you used of her aren't really doing any character development for her or building any kind of relationship. Also, I feel that the pairing would have lent itself really well to some digital some effect work since she is already a digital/ cyber girl and a lot of digital effects exist naturally in the anime.
I can see that xDD also if I could find a way of making it more apparent that she was a girl that sent herself into cyberspace to be with him 24/7 which only aggravated him to an argument that led into the accident that made him only want her back when he thought he lost her, she did indeed come back ,,, but it's hard to do in just a week (at least for me lol) ,, I personally though, did want to do a clean up of the original edit that I submitted even as raw as it was had a ton of filler and even more lip flap than this does.. so I did just that
but I do like your idea and maybe even will take the time to do a 3.0 and push myself to the next level of skillz xDD
Thank you for the advice and the ideas ^^ they really are appreciated
