Broken Alone

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Tribel
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Broken Alone

Post by Tribel » Sun Jul 17, 2016 11:51 pm

This is the first AMV I've made since joining the org and the first for my new channel, I hope you enjoy watching it even half as much as I loved making it!

Video: Broken Alone
Category: Romance, Sentimental
Anime: Chuunibyou demo Koi ga Shitai!, Chuunibyou demo Koi ga Shitai! Ren
Song: Sad Song
Artist: We The Kings
Creator: Tribel



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Jedinovice
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Re: Broken Alone

Post by Jedinovice » Mon Jul 18, 2016 10:20 am

This was really neat! I'm impressed!
Video editing on Kdenlive in Mint Linux KDE 17.0
H/W: An ASUS X200 dirt cheap Dual core atom n2840 at 2.16GHz
...and they said it couldn't be done!!! :lol:

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Tribel
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Re: Broken Alone

Post by Tribel » Wed Jul 20, 2016 5:03 pm

Jedinovice wrote:This was really neat! I'm impressed!
Thanks! I always appreciate any feedback.

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Re: Broken Alone

Post by Ochinchin AMVs » Wed Jul 20, 2016 5:17 pm

The ending felt off for me, the fade-out felt like there was more to the song, and the sudden noise heralding the credits ending kinda messed with the mood.
Otherwise, I liked it. Though for me personally, sad songs (sorry, lame pun) don't do as much as comedy/upbeat but that's just my taste. Maybe if I'd seen the anime it would affect me more.
Ore wa Ochinchin ga daisuku nandayo!

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Tribel
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Re: Broken Alone

Post by Tribel » Wed Jul 20, 2016 5:28 pm

Ochinchin AMVs wrote:The ending felt off for me, the fade-out felt like there was more to the song, and the sudden noise heralding the credits ending kinda messed with the mood.
Otherwise, I liked it. Though for me personally, sad songs (sorry, lame pun) don't do as much as comedy/upbeat but that's just my taste. Maybe if I'd seen the anime it would affect me more.
Yeah I should have worked on the ending better. Although the loud noise destroying the mood for the credits was entirely intentional xD. Thanks for the input. Feedback always welcome!

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Re: Broken Alone

Post by Pysh » Sat Jul 23, 2016 12:29 pm

That was really so Good. It's a Nice start for Your Channel considering it as first AMV... I love the motions You put in the Video using Pan/Crop, it really helped create a smooth Flow. I sure would like to see more of Your Videos :) Keep it up.
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Re: Broken Alone

Post by exkcal » Sat Jul 23, 2016 1:35 pm

Didn't you post another 'first amv' a while back? Good none the less.

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Re: Broken Alone

Post by Tribel » Sat Jul 23, 2016 1:40 pm

exkcal wrote:Didn't you post another 'first amv' a while back? Good none the less.
I said this was my first AMV I made since joining the org. The others I posted, were ones I made a while back. Trying to put all my old really sucky videos behind me. xD

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Re: Broken Alone

Post by Tribel » Sat Jul 23, 2016 3:01 pm

PYSH AMVs wrote:That was really so Good. It's a Nice start for Your Channel considering it as first AMV... I love the motions You put in the Video using Pan/Crop, it really helped create a smooth Flow. I sure would like to see more of Your Videos :) Keep it up.
Thanks so much! Although the credit should really go to all the awesome editors here on the org, without whom I never would have learned so much!

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