Can't Kill Us - Assault Lily Bouquet

[vkamv]

As some of you may know Shaft's Assault Lily Bouquet premiered a few days ago. Decided to make an AMV using just the first episode which has aired. A relatively simple edit (no masks lol). Mostly coloring and internal sync. Hope you enjoy this MadoHomuClone pair.

[Mol]

Yeah it could use like idk 1 more ep at least lol , but not bad try

[Karmelin]

Don't know if you wanted some feedback but here we go:

i start at the ending cause thats the logical thing to do: it's cool you have your own signature at the end, but it's a little sad it ends with an incomplete/bad fadeout soundwise, so that's something you could work on (it's very simple and just feels so much better). Just take your time, let the sound fade out completely and end with a fade to black or cut to black. Or let the sound end before the footage ends. It's a detail, but it devalues your signature imo.

The transitions around 0:35 and on are very nice and i would have loved to see some more of the smooth zooms and dynamic transitions (don't really know if it has been part of the anime as i didn't see it yet), of course i know how much work that is. I guess it has been a rather short project, given that you also only had to view one episode.

The picture quality is top notch, so good job on keeping the quality of the rip or bluray you own (i don't judge) the same throughout the rendering. The cutting is definitely on point with the music, also you did a good job on adjusting the speed of your cuts to the songs development.

As you stated you haven't played around much with additional effects, and of course that's not needed, but with the fast-paced and intense music some more smooth zoom-ins, impact effects and stuff like this would bring the footage to the same level as the music. I don't know if that's understandable.

[vkamv]

Yeah it could use like idk 1 more ep at least lol , but not bad try

Thanks Mol for the comment and view. Appreciate it.

Don't know if you wanted some feedback but here we go:

i start at the ending cause thats the logical thing to do: it's cool you have your own signature at the end, but it's a little sad it ends with an incomplete/bad fadeout soundwise, so that's something you could work on (it's very simple and just feels so much better). Just take your time, let the sound fade out completely and end with a fade to black or cut to black. Or let the sound end before the footage ends. It's a detail, but it devalues your signature imo.

The transitions around 0:35 and on are very nice and i would have loved to see some more of the smooth zooms and dynamic transitions (don't really know if it has been part of the anime as i didn't see it yet), of course i know how much work that is. I guess it has been a rather short project, given that you also only had to view one episode.

The picture quality is top notch, so good job on keeping the quality of the rip or bluray you own (i don't judge) the same throughout the rendering. The cutting is definitely on point with the music, also you did a good job on adjusting the speed of your cuts to the songs development.

As you stated you haven't played around much with additional effects, and of course that's not needed, but with the fast-paced and intense music some more smooth zoom-ins, impact effects and stuff like this would bring the footage to the same level as the music. I don't know if that's understandable.

Thank you very much for the in-depth comment. I will keep you tips in mind on next work. Thanks!