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Post by madbunny » Mon Apr 05, 2004 6:18 pm


Done and done.

Not bad, but not great either.
Your biggest asset is the ability to create a coherent storyline, now you just need to match it to your musical choices.
Did you edit to the music at all, or just make your storyline fit the overall length of the track?
The ending of your second one was pretty good. (very emotional)

Also, look into ways to fix your levels so you don't get that blockiness in the solids.
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Post by Calim » Mon Apr 05, 2004 6:31 pm

Hey,

Noober to the forums here...please anyone and everyone that can review this and please tell me what you think...and be brutal please I need nay want to get better.

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=35770

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Post by madbunny » Mon Apr 05, 2004 6:33 pm

mexicanjunior wrote:Feel free to review this one...

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=23282
You are just too good for you own bad self!
I want to know just how you get tiny little files like this to look as clean as you do.
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Post by madbunny » Mon Apr 05, 2004 7:11 pm

GohanV3 wrote:And, why yes i think i will submit videos for ops. I have two plz, one action one drama. Both are in my siggy. Step Down, and Its Not Easy. Plz and thank you. :)
O' i just realized you said no more than 3 vids. Well i have one more for you that only has 2 ops on it. Realization, its in my siggy. Once again, plz and thank you.
Done, done and done.

It's not easy and realization are by far the better videos here.
You've managed to take DBZ footage and make it look good, which for some reason is a rarity.

It's not easy was a very enjoyable video, I'll be keeping this one.
Realization actually felt like a video trailer, you should have submitted it to my trailer park thread.

With the exception of the parts with the big pink testicle looking creature, they pretty good.
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Post by madbunny » Mon Apr 05, 2004 7:25 pm

Done.
The video quality looked pretty good, and you picked a good song for a fight video, but unfortunately it never rose beyond those two criteria.

You've got the skills, since all of your editing was on the mark; lets see what you can do with better conceptual ideas.
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Post by Unlimited Rice » Mon Apr 05, 2004 7:30 pm


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Post by Inuyasha the 3rd » Mon Apr 05, 2004 7:46 pm

heres my video hope u like it

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=35735

the video is inuyasha and the song is The Pillows-Ride on shooting star

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Post by inthesto » Mon Apr 05, 2004 7:48 pm

madbunny wrote:

Done and done.

Not bad, but not great either.
Your biggest asset is the ability to create a coherent storyline, now you just need to match it to your musical choices.
Did you edit to the music at all, or just make your storyline fit the overall length of the track?
The ending of your second one was pretty good. (very emotional)

Also, look into ways to fix your levels so you don't get that blockiness in the solids.
Hee, hooray. It's nice get finally get some USEFUL feedback for once.

For the record, I don't particularly believe in editing a song for the purpose of an AMV. If the video can't fill in the entire song, I think that the concept probably needs a little re-thinking.

Also, I'm a little surprised that your review for my second video didn't include the question, "Why is that dude just stabbing guys?"

Still, thanks for the ops.

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Post by madbunny » Mon Apr 05, 2004 8:12 pm

inthesto wrote:
madbunny wrote:

Done and done.

Not bad, but not great either.
Your biggest asset is the ability to create a coherent storyline, now you just need to match it to your musical choices.
Did you edit to the music at all, or just make your storyline fit the overall length of the track?
The ending of your second one was pretty good. (very emotional)

Also, look into ways to fix your levels so you don't get that blockiness in the solids.
Hee, hooray. It's nice get finally get some USEFUL feedback for once.

For the record, I don't particularly believe in editing a song for the purpose of an AMV. If the video can't fill in the entire song, I think that the concept probably needs a little re-thinking.

Also, I'm a little surprised that your review for my second video didn't include the question, "Why is that dude just stabbing guys?"

Still, thanks for the ops.
I got the impression from your video that he was either defending the lady he was with, or that he had kidnapped her and they fell for each other.
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Post by GohanV3 » Mon Apr 05, 2004 8:14 pm

GohanV3 wrote:
And, why yes i think i will submit videos for ops. I have two plz, one action one drama. Both are in my siggy. Step Down, and Its Not Easy. Plz and thank you.
O' i just realized you said no more than 3 vids. Well i have one more for you that only has 2 ops on it. Realization, its in my siggy. Once again, plz and thank you.



Done, done and done.

It's not easy and realization are by far the better videos here.
You've managed to take DBZ footage and make it look good, which for some reason is a rarity.

It's not easy was a very enjoyable video, I'll be keeping this one.
Realization actually felt like a video trailer, you should have submitted it to my trailer park thread.

With the exception of the parts with the big pink testicle looking creature, they pretty good.
Kool, thnx for the reviews! 8)

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