This is my first amv and want some thoughts on it
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=67268
Tips on my first amv
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- Battousai_Killa
- Joined: Fri Jun 25, 2004 2:59 pm
I thought that this was an ok video. For, me, the song didnt fit the footage you used and could have been done better. The song is talking about never fighting again, and the character starts a battle with a group of people. You see how that doesnt very well match up? It was cool using the slow motion effects, but i wasnt sold on the video.
Darkness swallows my heart like the tide swallows a rock in the ocean. Like this rock, I am alone.
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wow, iono if it's just me but wow the picture was scratchy or something
the song hmm it was ok actually
i think where you were going was that showing how he was fighting blahblahblah and how ptless it was or something and in the in he stops fighting forever right??
and dude, some clips you put in are, well lets say kinda random clips or something, no significance or point what so ever
srry for being harsh, but when someone ask me to critique i critique
and ps again, the song goes with it ok and it could be really really good w/ a fighting type video which in the end they stop or drop the weapon or something or fall u know :D
you can critique me back too if you want, you can make a new thread about MY first AMV too, and i will respond, just make sure it's what you think and it's something to help me improve and not just an in ur face u suck etc :D
the song hmm it was ok actually
i think where you were going was that showing how he was fighting blahblahblah and how ptless it was or something and in the in he stops fighting forever right??
and dude, some clips you put in are, well lets say kinda random clips or something, no significance or point what so ever
srry for being harsh, but when someone ask me to critique i critique
and ps again, the song goes with it ok and it could be really really good w/ a fighting type video which in the end they stop or drop the weapon or something or fall u know :D
you can critique me back too if you want, you can make a new thread about MY first AMV too, and i will respond, just make sure it's what you think and it's something to help me improve and not just an in ur face u suck etc :D