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Post by Kai Stromler » Mon Apr 18, 2005 2:19 pm

I used to write and record music, but have kind of fallen off lately due to work commitments and other projects. These are selected from the lyrics that were done for the small number of original vocal songs that I ever arranged. The quality and content of these lyrics should provide ample evidence both why I stuck at it for so long, and why I'm a professional software engineer rather than a professional musician.


FIMBULVETR
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This was heavily influenced by Amon Amarth, and less so by Mithotyn and Einherjer, partly because they rock and partly because I can do a very good Johan Hegg-style voice. The chorus is a fair imitation of Norwegian but is probably completely wrong. This was recorded for the Tendrils of Burnt Flesh Ensare the Feeble-Willed demo, which ended up never getting issued.

Three winters gone
No light has shown
The snow blowing in from the north

Men's hearts freeze
At last they see
The power of winter come forth

Ragnarokkr - Fimbulvinter
Blasa Gjallarhorn
Komma Jotun, komma Fenrir
Slaget, dauden, og storm

Life to end
Ice descends
Bodies freeze in the fields

Naglfar sails
Through sleet and hail
On Vigrid's plain none shall yield

Ragnarokkr - Fimbulvinter
Blasa Gjallarhorn
Komma Jotun, komma Fenrir
Slaget, dauden, og storm

<solo/lead break>

Ragnarokkr - Fimbulvinter
Blasa Gjallarhorn
Komma Jotun, komma Fenrir
Slaget, dauden, og STORM!


AUTOPSIED WHILE ALIVE
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Another one off Tendrils...., this one was inspired by Atrocity's first album, some of Hypocrisy's earlier stuff, and a lunchtime conversation. Not kidding. The content is kinda sick, so for the benefit of non-brutal-death-fans it's been spoiler-tagged out.
sick death metal lyrics wrote:
Wheeled in for dissection
No life beneath the sheet
Flesh and blood lie cold and still
No spirit, only meat

See where your god has got you
See what you've become
Open flesh and cut the bone
Humanity undone

Naked lying on the slab
Gutters drain your juice away
Scalpels cleansed to razor skin
Tools for rending on the tray

See where your god has got you
See what you've become
Open flesh and cut the bone
Humanity undone

A flow of red, the first cut's made
Blood from one who's died
Screams of terror fill the air
Autopsied while alive

See where your god has got you
See what you've become
Open flesh and cut the bone
Humanity undone

No turning back, the paper's signed
The patient must have died
Doctors work their gruesome task --
Autopsied while alive!

AUTOPSIED WHILE ALIVE!!

DROWNED IN BLOOD AND GRIME
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This one is off the Vexilla regis prodeunt infernii demo, which was issued....in a run of about five copies. This was a concept demo done for credit, based on Dante's Inferno. Yeah, yeah, Iced Earth, all that; I was originally thinking of doing Purgatorio for that reason, but all the good songs came out of Hell. :P This one is based on the marshes of the Styx, which is Canto VIII. The musical inspiration is probably equal parts Slayer, Forbidden, and Onslaught; that whole late-thrash-verging-on-death-metal sound.

Drowned!
In blood and grime!

Violence!
No place to hide!

In the marshes of the styx
Five planes down to despair
Fighting bleeding dying souls
Millions everywhere
In their anger still they kill
Murder and make strife
But when they're torn to pieces
They just spring back to life

Drowned!
In blood and grime!
Drowned!
In blood and grime!

Drowned in blood and grime!

<solo>

Take no mercy on these damned
Souls merit none at all
As they beg put foot to face
And make the bastard fall

[spoken]:
One of them recognized me, and ran to the boat, covered in filth, begging for mercy. I turned my head, and had none.

[roared]:
I pushed him back
And they tore him
limb
from
LIMB!!

Drowned!
In blood and grime!
Drowned!
In blood and grime!
Drowned in blood and grime!


LAST VIEW OF SKY
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Wow, an actual "internal" song! (Internal, meaning proceeding from within the writer as an emotional response, rather than being written on a topic or because the song needs some words over the music, which is usually called "external".) This is basically a Hypocrisy-style death metal ballad, intended for the same sort of knarled, chunky riffage as an embed medium, and with a typical Tagtgren-esque commitment to lyrical fidelity. This was inspired by the deaths of two friends, one accidental and one not, and has not been recorded yet.

No

Today
Today is the day
Today your life's to end

What do you leave
What do you leave undone
Lift your eyes from passing life
You'll never see the sun

Can you open your eyes
See it all for the last time
Today your life ends
Take in last
View of sky

No

You'll never see
Never know
Your final hour of life
Draw breath -- you must die

Can you open your eyes
See it all for the last time
Today your life ends
Take in last
View of sky

Let the air fill your lungs
Turn your face to the sky
Death is coming for you
Are we ever ready when we die?

Can you open your eyes
See it all for the last time
Today your life ends
Take in last
View of sky

Can you open your eyes
See it all for the last time
Today your life ends
Take in last
View of sky


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Post by Flint the Dwarf » Mon Apr 18, 2005 2:33 pm

For some reason when I was reading those, I couldn't help but imagine Hansi Kursch singing them (namely "Drowned in Blood and Grime"). :P And it somehow fit very well.
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Post by OtakuForLife » Mon Apr 18, 2005 7:07 pm

Nice dark lyrics man :)

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Post by Chaosx123 » Mon Apr 18, 2005 8:27 pm

Here's one of mine.

“The Voices”

I start hearing voices now
They won’t stop speaking to me
They keep telling me crazy things now
They keep insisting there’s no foul
I keep begging them to stop
(Pre-Chorus)
They keep pressing me till’ I break
They won’t stop even for my sake

(Chorus x2)
I’ve heard them for so long now
Just leave me alone
You’re destroying my mind now
I can not live like this
(End-Chorus)
JUST GO AWAY!!!!
You’re destroying my life now.

I keep hearing these voices now
They keep telling me to give in
That’s not how it’s going to be
They won’t get me to fall to them
I keep begging them to stop
(Pre-Chorus)
They keep pressing me till’ I break
They won’t stop even for my sake

(Chorus x2)
I’ve heard them for so long now
Just leave me alone
You’re destroying my mind now
I can not live like this
(End-Chorus)
JUST GO AWAY!!!!
You’re destroying my life now.

Please just go away x2

(Chorus)
I’ve heard them for so long now
Just leave me alone
You’re destroying my mind now
I can not live like this
(End-Chorus)
JUST GO AWAY!!!!
You’re destroying my life now.


I will never fall to them
I will make them go away

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Post by Chaosx123 » Tue Apr 19, 2005 12:03 pm

Any one else have any?

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Post by Tom the Fish » Tue Apr 19, 2005 1:31 pm

I've got a few CDs out, but since we're instrumental, I can't post any lyrics...

Tom

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Post by Flint the Dwarf » Wed Apr 20, 2005 11:26 am

Just translate them using onomatopoeia. :P
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Post by Dream-chan » Thu Apr 21, 2005 6:59 am

In a total contrast to what's been posted already, these are heavily influenced by country... except one that is modeled after Linkin Park. That one should be obvious.

A Cry from My Heart
by Dream-chan and Terran Hawk

What can I do
What can I say
Just to get you
To look my way

Oh, how I've tried
To tell you from the start
You are the one
Who holds me heart

Every time
You smile at me
It sends my heart pounding
Like the waves at sea

This is just
A cry from my heart
Slowly
Tearing me apart

With every single
gentle touch
It brightens my world
I love you so much

I wish I could
let you know
Just how much
You've made my heart grow

This is just
A cry from my heart
Slowly
Tearing me apart

Every moment
I spend with you
I wish I could scream
How much I love you

But my fears kept me silent
Crying through the night
Always hiding
My heart from your sight

This is just
A cry from my heart
Slowly
Tearing me apart

Now the words are there
For you to see
Just how much
You mean to me

And I'm begging you
Don't turn away
I want so much
For you to stay

This is just
A cry from my heart
Slowly
Tearing me apart

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Wish You Were Here
by Dream-chan

I wish you were here
Here to dry my tears
I want you with me now
I want you here; I don't care how

I wish you'd never gone away
I wish that you'd come back to stay
I wish like hell you'd never gone
Without you here, I can't hold on

It makes no sense to me
How this feeling came to be
We started out as friends
But I somehow fell in love again

Wish you were here
Here to soothe my fears
To show me that you're real
To tell you how I really feel

I lied when I said it's all right
And trapped myself in an endless night
It makes no sense, this pain inside
Feels like maybe part of me's died

Grant my wish; please come back
Give me back the heart I lack
I wish you were here
Being alone is my greatest fear

My greatest fear
Is not having you here
I can't fight this fight alone
Please come home.

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Untitled
by Dream-chan

I hate not knowing
What's happening to me
I hate revealing
My insecurities
I hold on tight
Don't wanna get swept away
But the current can't anchor me
So I'm drowning anyway

Something inside
Battles just for air
Searching blindly
For what just isn't there
Holding tight but
Longing to let go
Wanting something
What, I'll never know

All I do is give
All you do is take
Leaving pain and hurt
Strewn about your wake
You left my heart to die
On the cold and dirty floor
And all that this has done
Is make me want you more

Someone inside
Begging to get in
Figures blindly
Pushing me to win
Holding tight but
Longing to let go
Wanting something
But what, I'll never know

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I can't find the other two right now, so I guess I can post them later....
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Post by The Oceanborn » Mon Apr 25, 2005 1:27 pm

(considering myself)
Well, I did write lyrics, but that's gown old ('ve seen that somewhere, mmh @@ ^^)
I'm playing guitar. Electro. Uh-huh, well I guess I never had much problems with doing music. Something like this. ^_____^ (dissipates doing some ultra heavy riffs)
Memento Mori.

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