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WIP would like some comments

Post by WhereNext » Fri Aug 12, 2005 8:35 pm

Ok, so i have been working on my new AMV for about a week now, and i have already had to watch it so many times to tweak timing on it that i have lost some perspective on it. So on that note, i am releasing a beta version of the work i have done so far for the first time ever. I'd like any comments on what might need to be fixed, and whether what i have so far works or not. I have about 1:10 completed so far, and you will know when you reach the end of what i have finished working on when you hit a clip w/ subtitles in it, since i haven't removed them from that clip yet or done much work on it.

anyway please tell me what you think. If i am lucky, i will have it finished before the end of the month. I only plan on leaving the beta up for a few days at most, then will be deleting it.

Oh, and almost forgot, if anybody has any suggestions for an effect or anything for the part where the subtitled clips are, it would be appreciated. As of right now i have no idea what i want to do for that part.

http://rapidshare.de/files/3884574/Wher ... t.avi.html

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Post by WhereNext » Fri Aug 12, 2005 10:17 pm

since rapidshare kinda sucks, here is another link for the file.

http://www.angelfire.com/vamp2/wherenex ... taTest.avi

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Post by WhereNext » Sat Aug 13, 2005 1:31 am

i just noticed that remote linking of the angelfire copy doesn't work, but if you copy and paste it into your web browser it works ;P

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Post by Porcelain Star » Sat Aug 13, 2005 8:54 pm

I'll watch it and if you're feeling nice maybe you'd watch my FF8 vid and just let me know what you think ^_^

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Post by Porcelain Star » Sat Aug 13, 2005 9:02 pm

hehe you've done a very good job. it flows well, the timing is awesome and the lip sync is right on ^_~ it's heavy on the effects but you've used them in a very interesting way so it just adds to the vid (I especially like the part where the girls standing in a towel and kicks the other guy and you showed a bubble where she's talking)

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Post by WhereNext » Sat Aug 13, 2005 9:04 pm

thanks for taking the time to check it out.

Sure, i'll check out yr FF8 vid and leave some remarks^^

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Post by WhereNext » Sun Aug 14, 2005 12:31 am

ok i took a look at yr vid. The song provides a real nice feel to the vid. The whole dance scene fit very well, but at the end of that sequence it seemed a little odd how she looked away from squall when the lyrics said something along the lines of "i only have eyes for you". I liked the ending segment as well, had a real good flow to it. But i also didn't quite get why the usage of the clip of seifer(i think thats his name, haven't played this game in a long time) and squall fighting, it just seemed a little out of place. Overall though, you kept the feel and flow going very well.

I would also like to see you put your vids on the local server, would make it alot more convenient to download, and i am sure your vids would get more downloads and opinions as well.

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Post by Porcelain Star » Sun Aug 14, 2005 12:53 am

thanks so much for taking a look. to be honest I don't have all the footage from the game and my brother (who owns it) doesn't live close enough to borrow it from again ~_~, I had trouble getting them up on the local server but hopefully soon my brother will host them.

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