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- CheesecakeOtaku
- Joined: Wed Oct 05, 2005 2:40 pm
- Location: 101100101101010
Very good and solid concept that I think was excised fairly well. Some of the scenes didn't really fit the moment with me but hey to each their own!
Good:
-95% of the scene usage with the music worked very nicely.
-Excellany ending with the power switch with one issue(I'll discuss in the negative)
-I like how you refrained from "overusing" special effects and tried to emphasize story/moment/feeling instead of "flash" and decor.
-Great file size!
Negative:
-Not a biggy just that some of the scenes didn't really work with me ^^;
-My main complaint is kind of silly...I wish you would have let the screen stay black after the power switch scene to kind of capture the moment instead of jumping right to the end.
Overall Grade: 9.1 ('.^)^ Rock on and keep em comin
~Cheesecake~
Good:
-95% of the scene usage with the music worked very nicely.
-Excellany ending with the power switch with one issue(I'll discuss in the negative)
-I like how you refrained from "overusing" special effects and tried to emphasize story/moment/feeling instead of "flash" and decor.
-Great file size!
Negative:
-Not a biggy just that some of the scenes didn't really work with me ^^;
-My main complaint is kind of silly...I wish you would have let the screen stay black after the power switch scene to kind of capture the moment instead of jumping right to the end.
Overall Grade: 9.1 ('.^)^ Rock on and keep em comin
~Cheesecake~
"Who wants to feel sexy?...Who wants to come up to the front and feel sexy with the captain?"
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- Joined: Wed Jun 29, 2005 9:11 am
- Location: LA
First off, Thank you for commenting!CheesecakeOtaku wrote: -My main complaint is kind of silly...I wish you would have let the screen stay black after the power switch scene to kind of capture the moment instead of jumping right to the end.
Overall Grade: 9.1 ('.^)^ Rock on and keep em comin
~Cheesecake~
And that complaint isnt silly at all!
I actually watched teh transition of the ending, to the credits like 10 times, debating if I should make it longer. Its my own fault due to lazyness, but yes I actually agree wtih you there, LOL
Thanks again
- CheesecakeOtaku
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