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My new AMV in progress! Steady updates! Help me! :P

Post by FAII » Mon Mar 13, 2006 9:16 am

(I don't know where this belongs. If the ops feel it doesn't belong here, feel free to move it)

I'm making a new AMV on the theme "Comedy". With very little time, I doubt it'll be high class, but at least I'll have one for the AMV contest in April (at UppCon in Sweden).

I need feedback, but I can't ask on the Swedish anime forums because a lot of those people are going to UppCon and I don't wanna spoil it for them (and with it my chances). Razz

So I'll be regularly keeping this thread updated with new information and clips from my AMV, project name "All The Girls & Naruto".

Currently, three alpha v. 0.07 clips are available:
(the text inside of the quote marks after the links are translations of my version of the song so you'll know when in the song it is and how the clips are connected to my lyrics Very Happy)

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=G71WMPLE
"...secret, which no one knows,"

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=I0OHS621
"...older brother,"

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=M141FSSV
"...the least gay at all,
Haku looks like a girl,"

"Against Naruto's oroike (Sexy no Jutsu), he stands unphazed,
He gets seduced by Naruto's body,
The noodle boy's the one he wants,
Not even Rock Lee is good enough,"

"Sasuke is semeru (seme),
Naruto's ukeru (uke),
Y-A-O-I, yo!"

"When they walk on by the crowd faints,
Sakura is so darn disappointed,"

Please check them out and leave feedback.

About this AMV:
Studio: Yuna Productions (Yuna, that's me!)
Projected length: 2:56
Projected length including opening- and ending sequences: 3:56 approx
Anime: Naruto
Theme: Comedy/Shounen Ai
Material: Anime, manga, fanart, random pictures of cows
Song: "All Flickor" ~Yuna Vocals~

OK, so I've done a lot of "Yuna"-things. YunaMix, (Short)Edits, Extended (of Mp3s), YunaSubs (FFVII:AC), YunaRip (FFVII:AC, Invader Zim), YunaCaps (captions of Stargate Atlantis) and now finally Yuna Vocals. Razz

So what the heck is Yuna Vocals you ask? It's me singing! I'm going to use the karaoke version of Linda Bengtzing's "Alla Flickor (Swedish).

However, I'm not just going to sing it, I'm rewriting it as well! To fit my agenda better! >: D

For the first time ever, my ending credits will feature a section for alpha/beta/gamma-testers. People who spend some time helping me with the AMV by downloading my clips and leaving feedback will get their names (names or nicks, your choice) put into it.

It's not much, but it's something!

The alpha clips are extremely early alphas (v. 0.07). I'm obviously going to re-align almost all of the footage to crop out the Cartoon Network logo and keep heads from getting chopped off.

I will also, obviously, resize all of the material so that there aren't any black stripes visible for when the picture ends :p.


My Yuna Vocals version will be in Swedish, so most of you won't be able to understand it without a translate. So here's one:

"Blueberry pie, it tastes good!"

"He has wild, blue mangahair,
He has firm, nice thighs,
But I know that he has a secret,
Which no one knows,"

"Sakura thinks she's got a chance,
That he'll be hers, she'll be his,
But I know that he has a secret,
Which no one knows,"

"A bishounen whom everyone thinks,
Is a sex god in ninja shoes,
Just like his older brother,"

"When he walks on by, the kinnins scream,
Then they chase him down the street,
He's the one that all the girls want,"

"When he walks on by, people have nosebleeds,
Look at this random ninja cow, (which reminds me, please submit pictures if you have some of ninja cows Razz)
He's the one whom all the kinnins want,
Also Naruto, tada!"

"He has purple lipstick,
Bloodshot eyes like you wouldn't believe,
And I know that he has a secret,
Which no one knows,"

"A ninja boy who claims that he's,
Not the least gay at all,
Haku looks like a girl,"

"Against Naruto's oroike (Sexy no Jutsu), he stands unphazed,
He gets seduced by Naruto's body,
The noodle boy's the one he wants,
Not even Rock Lee is good enough,"

"Sasuke is semeru (seme),
Naruto's ukeru (uke),
Y-A-O-I, yo!"

"When they walk on by the crowd faints,
Sakura is so darn disappointed,
SasuNaru yaoi is so good!"

"When they make out, people have nosebleeds,
Poor little Lee (he's in love with Naruto, obviously) is speechless,
They give all the fangirls what they want,
And the fanboys like little me,
Ninja cows are dangerous!"

So, feedback! Please!

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Post by Wakko227 » Mon Mar 13, 2006 11:36 am

Megaupload is so annoying... Anyway if your gonna d/l then get the third clip (43 secs). The first and second only contain one scene (fyi). First off it's a great idea. Second off I want to see it with english lyrics after the contest =D. This is so original to me. What's sasuke saying in the background of the second clip? Are you thinking about trying to move his arm in the lick lick motion? 1st clip can you try to edit out naruto's pouch?
3rd clip Sasuke's wtf reaction is what i said to a couple of scenes in the 3rd clip lol. The nosebleed could be more noticeable but I'm sure you would've taken care of that. Cosplay in your clip is great. I really can't wait to see the rest of the footage and how you will be putting it together. Get er done!

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Post by FAII » Mon Mar 13, 2006 12:15 pm

Wakko227 wrote:Megaupload is so annoying... Anyway if your gonna d/l then get the third clip (43 secs). The first and second only contain one scene (fyi). First off it's a great idea. Second off I want to see it with english lyrics after the contest =D. This is so original to me. What's sasuke saying in the background of the second clip? Are you thinking about trying to move his arm in the lick lick motion? 1st clip can you try to edit out naruto's pouch?
3rd clip Sasuke's wtf reaction is what i said to a couple of scenes in the 3rd clip lol. The nosebleed could be more noticeable but I'm sure you would've taken care of that. Cosplay in your clip is great. I really can't wait to see the rest of the footage and how you will be putting it together. Get er done!
Yeah, but it's free, fast and gives you at least 30 days.

Anyway, that's Itachi in the 2nd clip :P. I've changed it so that we zoom in on him. I'll add more stuff. And Kisame standing behind saying "I wish I were that ice cream".

For the 1st clip, I'll edit out Naruto's pouch. I've got enough Paint and Photoshop experience by now to do that :D.

Yes, the nosebleed (and the blush) will be made more noticable.

The final edit will be in high resolution h264, making it much easier to read text and stuff :p.

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Post by FAII » Tue Mar 14, 2006 1:43 am

5 news clips available now! It's from the Alpha ver. 0.12 (the clips yesterday were v. 0.07 even though they were mistakenly marked as 0.09).

As a... special feature, todays clips feature the karaoke version instead of the vocal version.

Clip 1: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=1FYCFACU
Length: 21 seconds
Lyrics: ..."secret/Which no one knows/A bishounen whom everyone thinks..."

Clip 2: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=PEFZZWVP
Length: 6 seconds
Lyrics: "...older brother/When he walks by..."

Clip 3: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=O94ENP0G
Length: 6 seconds
Lyrics: "Look at this random ninja cow."

Clip 4: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=IJEGYBSZ
Length: 5 seconds
Lyrics: "Also Naruto, Tada!"

Clip 5:
Length: 43 seconds
Lyrics: "...that he's not the least gay/Haku looks like a girl/Naruto's oroike leaves him unphazed/He gets seduced by Naruto's body/The noodle boy's the one that he wants/Not even Rock Lee is good enough/Sasuke is semeru/Naruto's ukeru/Yaoi, yo!/When they walk past the crowd faints/Sakura gets so darn disappointed..."

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Post by FAII » Tue Mar 14, 2006 1:48 am

Forgot to include the link for the 5th clip:
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=Q6049661

Download, discuss, comment and make suggestions, please :D.

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Post by Wakko227 » Tue Mar 14, 2006 10:43 am

Nice job with making that pouch disappear. Should you make sasuke have a heart shape eye? or is that too much? Random cow scene you could you put the the cow going against a ninja like just put someone's head on the bottom left side of the screen with the look -_-o <<like that with the sweat drop thing they do. For the sakura and sasuke scene you could maybe have sasuke use some hand movements and transform sakura into naruto. This would go to the scene of sasuke and naruto kissing. Since sakura has her eyes closed she won't notice.

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Post by FAII » Tue Mar 14, 2006 11:17 am

Wakko227 wrote:Nice job with making that pouch disappear. Should you make sasuke have a heart shape eye? or is that too much? Random cow scene you could you put the the cow going against a ninja like just put someone's head on the bottom left side of the screen with the look -_-o <<like that with the sweat drop thing they do. For the sakura and sasuke scene you could maybe have sasuke use some hand movements and transform sakura into naruto. This would go to the scene of sasuke and naruto kissing. Since sakura has her eyes closed she won't notice.
The heart shaped eye I can do. And a Ninja head with a sweatdrop.

However, turning Sakura into Sasuke, nah. I'd have to do some major editing in all kinds of programs for that so that it would blend in well with Sasuke and the background and the lighting.

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Post by FAII » Wed Mar 15, 2006 8:15 am

Latest update:

Version 0.27:

Clip #1: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=JV86BW0A
Length: 5 seconds
Lyrics: "Curry ramen tastes good!" (altered lyrics)

Clip #2: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=B8TPYNLC
Length: 34 seconds
Lyrics: "...secret/Which no one knows/A bishounen whom everyone think's/A sexgod in ninja shoes/Just like his older brother..."

Clip #3: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=HMRS7FUD
Length: 6 seconds
Lyrics: "Look at this random ninja cow..."

Clip #4: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=B49LDA01
Length: 7 seconds
Lyrics: "Also Naruto, tada!"

Clip #5:
Length: 59 seconds
Lyrics: "...that he's not the least gay/Haku looks like a girl/Naruto's oroike leaves him unphazed/He gets seduced by Naruto's body/The noodle boy's the one that he wants/Not even Rock Lee is good enough/Sasuke is semeru/Naruto's ukeru/Yaoi, yo!/When they walk past the crowd faints/Sakura gets so darn disappointed/SasuNaru yaoi is so good/When they make out/Lendai's (main guy in control of the Con at which this will compete) nose starts to bleed/Rock Lee makes out with Gaara boldly..."

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Post by FAII » Wed Mar 15, 2006 8:17 am

Gah! I did it again! Why don't we have Edit, anyway?!

Here's the link for the new Clip #5:
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=IDREK4Z7

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Post by FAII » Wed Mar 15, 2006 10:10 am

Obviously, the lyrics for #2 is wrong:
"...a secret,/Which no one knows/Sakura thinks she's got a chance/That he'll be hers, she'll be his/But I know that he has a secret/Which no one knows/A bishounen whom everyone thinks/Is a sex god in ninja shoes/Just like his older brother/When he walks by..."

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