Ummm... Song... was there some part of the "Forbidden Memories" narrative that you forgot to submit? I thought it was odd, at first, that you only submitted one file for that one, while most narratives came as sets of two or three files - but then I just figured that Helen wrote an especially succinct narrative. Looking at the one she just put up here, though, the rest of it does seem familiar from when I was making my first attempt at recording the narratives.Jasper-Isis wrote:...more than half of my narrative was left out. I don't think my narrative is that long (it's about the same length as Ararat's). And I believe that letting the audience know a bit of plot background before the video starts will enhance their enjoyment (or at least comprehension) of my segment. Its plot is rather esoteric, after all.
Here's my complete narrative. I would like it if at least the first and last paragraph were included in the project.Love is freedom. [image 0a] Love can be hopeful, liberating, innocent, frail, and longing. Love threatens to break us apart but promises to build us into something new. Love lets us escape from our oppressors. And for these reasons, [image0b] love is often forbidden.
[image 1]She came into his life like a gently falling star and melted away the winter in his soul. She accepted him for who he was, even after she discovered [image 2] his secret. Through their love, he felt like he had finally been released [image 3] from his loneliness. But his freedom was not eternal. Fate [image 4] forced them apart, and all that remained [slight pause] were their [image 5] forbidden memories. [Fade to bumper?]
From the yearning lyrics of Jim Croce to Van Craven's haunting piano adaptation, the song "Time in a Bottle" carries with it a bittersweet message. Happy scenes accompany sad melodies, while happy melodies complement sad rememberings. This [very slight pause] is the story of a tragic, broken love.
This also explains why I couldn't figure out quite where to place a couple of the images, despite the fact that I knew this narrative was one where they were specifically tagged to go with certain points of the audio.
The "intermission" is going to be a separate (much smaller) file. It occurred to me that, while it serves a purpose when showing the film to a large audience - giving them a chance to get up and purchase some more vending-machine caffene and sugar - people watching this on their own might prefer to skip over it. So I'll be packaging it in a manner that lets the viewer decide whether they want the built-in "intermission" break when they're watching it.Jasper-Isis wrote:The intro looks very good! I must say that it was rather amusing to see my name come up by itself after everybody else's. Will you be putting a bumper after my video that says something like "intermission"?
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I'll try rebuilding the AVI indexes with a couple of different tools this evening, burn a few CDs with the current and post-rebuild versions of the preview, and see if I can duplicate your audio problems in WMP - and whether any of the rebuilt versions are free of similar problems.
I think the might be one of the many cases where Microsoft produced a media player that supported only their own tools' output, rather than the actual relevant standard (or even their own documented standard), and the developers of other players followed suit. Like perfectly valid HTML/CSS documentation that refuses to render properly in IE, I think this might be a case where a perfectly valid file isn't being read properly by a family of media players that are making assumptions about content and structure that they really shouldn't be making.
I can also try making a version using the Matroska container format, which is much better designed and probably more consistently implemented. The trap with this is that it might replace partial incompatabilities with total incompatabilities - forcing people to install new media players or plug-ins to view the film. I've only seen on AMV in this format ("Surfing on the Blocks", by Zarxrax, I believe), so I can hardly say it's as popular or as well-known in this community as AVI is.
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If any of you have a Windows-based tool that allows you to rebuilt an AVI index without re-encodeing the data streams, would you mind trying that to see if it fixes the audio problem on your computers. So far as I'm concerned, Windows Media Player compatibility is the key here, where it's the most popular media player out there, and both the Linux and Mac people have players at their disposal that can play practically anything.