Sum 41 MEP (All Tracks Filled)
- Enigma
- That jolly ol' bastid
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Re: Sum 41 MEP (2 Tracks Available)
I'm interested in joining, Taking track 11 with....FLCL, But ExSphere already used it , If you have any recommendations it would be appreciated .
- ExSphere
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Re: Sum 41 MEP (2 Tracks Available)
TrigunEnigma wrote:I'm interested in joining, Taking track 11 with....FLCL, But ExSphere already used it , If you have any recommendations it would be appreciated .
- NS
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Re: Sum 41 MEP (2 Tracks Available)
Exactly, I already gave that suggestion and it's perfect.
- ExSphere
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Re: Sum 41 MEP (2 Tracks Available)
I stole your suggestionNS wrote:Exactly, I already gave that suggestion and it's perfect.
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- Enigma
- That jolly ol' bastid
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Re: Sum 41 MEP (2 Tracks Available)
Cute. And thanks for the suggestion ExSphere, NS
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Re: Sum 41 MEP (2 Tracks Available)
:11-:12 on yer new beta eva, it works but it disrupts the flow because it's slow. Other then that I definately like your beginning way more now. as for after that with the oval sequence thing, I see how you changed it, try cutting back on the effects a little there. It's just a little to heavy what you have on the picture.
- SilkAMV
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Re: Sum 41 MEP (2 Tracks Available)
I think :11-12 is fine. But :14-19 is definitely still too slow. The song is still loud and powerful so you really shouldn't start with the mellow scenes so soon. Ditto on that oval effect. It's a little over-done. Everything else is an improvement though.
- EvaFan
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Re: Sum 41 MEP (2 Tracks Available)
Ok you got me, I'll just replace all of it (I actually had that feeling but I really liked that lip sequence IMO it fit with the slow stuff I had earlier but doesn't now). The FX I'm not changing and it looks great, ya bein too picky. First you weren't feelin it now its overdone. I particularly like this new version of it cause it gives off the blacked out feeling from the lyrics.
You guys better get serious with beta testing your fellow DZ friends tracks. I'm amused by the stuff your spewing for em unless your telling them off the thread.
Ex: At 0:35 I decided to play connect the dots with your edges, fun timez . 1:05-1:06 that quick part in there, why is it there? A bunch of slow scenes then a random quick scene then slow scenes again. I think the black thing is synced to the bass but girl is flying in the air before it and it feels like a ghost frame. The part at 1:11 where he lifts his face up would work better if synced to the lyrics "now" instead of randomly lifting it up. 1::16 has a quick flash of blue, looks like a ghost frame or something. IMO the cigarette scene should go first for the smoke part to get the FX usage across better but that's totally up to you works both ways.
I don't care if you don't want me to help you with your video quality but its a fucking waste to leave it like that. Atleast for the smoke FX part it is cause it works well but is literally destroyed by the quality. The broken edges parts may or may not be fixable, they are pretty bad. Get someone to help you 4srsly. This is a great track, there's no point to not fix these simple things.
You guys better get serious with beta testing your fellow DZ friends tracks. I'm amused by the stuff your spewing for em unless your telling them off the thread.
Ex: At 0:35 I decided to play connect the dots with your edges, fun timez . 1:05-1:06 that quick part in there, why is it there? A bunch of slow scenes then a random quick scene then slow scenes again. I think the black thing is synced to the bass but girl is flying in the air before it and it feels like a ghost frame. The part at 1:11 where he lifts his face up would work better if synced to the lyrics "now" instead of randomly lifting it up. 1::16 has a quick flash of blue, looks like a ghost frame or something. IMO the cigarette scene should go first for the smoke part to get the FX usage across better but that's totally up to you works both ways.
I don't care if you don't want me to help you with your video quality but its a fucking waste to leave it like that. Atleast for the smoke FX part it is cause it works well but is literally destroyed by the quality. The broken edges parts may or may not be fixable, they are pretty bad. Get someone to help you 4srsly. This is a great track, there's no point to not fix these simple things.
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- ExSphere
- Joined: Sat Feb 03, 2007 9:43 pm
Re: Sum 41 MEP (2 Tracks Available)
Thank you for letter boxing it
The flow defiantly gets interrupted a couple times during this beta. ( pretty much what NS and Silk said ) And please get rid of that oval effect.
That sound doesn't call for such a noticeable change in appearance. Try getting rid of the oval and keyframing the opacity of the scenes in the background from 90 to 100 to 90 repeat. And create a flicker effect. Something very subtle and not so flashy would work much better.
and for the clip you pointed out, I do plan on fixing that. And for the scene with Canti flying to catch Haruko before the baseball flies out does look off putting. I'll replace it with something more fitting. If you have any suggestions on how you would fix that error I would appreciate it more than snarky sarcasm.
The flow defiantly gets interrupted a couple times during this beta. ( pretty much what NS and Silk said ) And please get rid of that oval effect.
That sound doesn't call for such a noticeable change in appearance. Try getting rid of the oval and keyframing the opacity of the scenes in the background from 90 to 100 to 90 repeat. And create a flicker effect. Something very subtle and not so flashy would work much better.
and for the clip you pointed out, I do plan on fixing that. And for the scene with Canti flying to catch Haruko before the baseball flies out does look off putting. I'll replace it with something more fitting. If you have any suggestions on how you would fix that error I would appreciate it more than snarky sarcasm.