Will give 1:1 feedback! (WIP) Sibyl's Kiss [Psycho Pass AMV]

[EnQuatre]

I give detailed, time-stamped, borderline-nit-picky feedback, so I promise the exchange will be worth it if you're looking for a second opinion! I'm willing to give feedback on both WIPs and completed videos!

This is a WIP Psycho-Pass AMV that I've been working on for a while now! I'd appreciate some honest feedback!

https://youtu.be/mj9h6j2eHUg

Title (working title): Sibyl's Kiss
Anime: Psycho-Pass
Music track: The Devil Within (Digital Daggers)
Length: 3:51

Points in particular:

-This is my first AMV using Sony Vegas (all my previous work was in Cyberlink PD12), so my basic effects/transitions usage is perhaps a little rough. I'd be extremely grateful if you can pick apart my noobish-ness and give me some advice on what to refine or fix!

-This is just a quick and dirty encode, so the visual quality is obviously not up to scratch. Not looking for feedback on video quality.

-I'd also appreciate comments on where sync can be touched up, if applicable. After working on a video for months, everything always looks fine, so a second opinion really helps.