Another Toki wo Kakeru Shoujo AMV

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Another Toki wo Kakeru Shoujo AMV

Post by shaister » Thu May 17, 2007 9:09 am


I'd hoped to be the first to enter a Toki wo Kakeru Shoujo vid on the Org before its images were imprinted in your minds, but apparently AtomX waits for no one. :O
Anyways, it's about a girl looking back on a life lived to its fullest.

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Post by Orwell » Thu May 17, 2007 10:07 am

This video would have been sooo much better if it had internal sync. As it is, it's still pretty good, but it doesn't make much of a impact on the viewer.
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Post by JaddziaDax » Thu May 17, 2007 10:24 am

i donno i think its pretty good story telling, and it had quite a few effective internal syncs imo...

damn i gotta see this movie

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Post by Orzmella » Thu May 17, 2007 11:09 am

2 diffrent stories , one ending ...
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Post by Ingow » Thu May 17, 2007 11:40 am

holy shit that ending hit like hell, totally awesome

and wtf I saw LOTS of internal sync there, especially in all the parts where the song is building up. great scene selection pretty much through the entire video too, I think even I'm going to take a look at that movie now

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(I also gotta say first I had this very cliche like feeling that this kind of music always needs some kind of old film filter or at least some saturation tweaking or anything but it really wasn't needed at all in the end.)
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Post by hydrax » Thu May 17, 2007 12:06 pm

Awesome. Great story telling :up:

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Post by Bakadeshi » Thu May 17, 2007 1:13 pm

at first I thought this was boring...

then it picked up towards the middle and I thought this was pretty cool...

then the end hit me like a brick...

and then it all fell into place what you were trying to do with the video, and I thought it was brilliant. :up:

Edit (Since I replied before reading the now 5 other replies that wasn't there when I first downloaded): This had its fair share of internal sync, it was just pretty slow paced editing... But this is brilliant for the storytelling more than the synch. Especially since its not exactly the story of the movie, he twisted it a little for his purpose.

Heck, I havn't pulled this out for a while... 8-)

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Post by Brad » Thu May 17, 2007 1:27 pm

I liked it :) A lot of it was really clever and the pacing was spot on. I thought the song fit well. So yeah. Solid video ^_^ :up:
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Post by Dark-Krystal » Thu May 17, 2007 1:41 pm

Awesome ! It's really the kind of video I Loved :P

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Post by Otohiko » Thu May 17, 2007 2:04 pm

I still don't think it's fair to compare this video with AtomX's, since other than the footage they don't actually share that much in common. Personally I liked the composition of this one better - your editing was simple, but the concept was really strong (if linear) and you executed it effectively. Like Bakadeshi said, it had the 'hits you like a brick' moment that totally made it worthwhile and complete.
Wonderful job, 5/5 right there.

(I need to watch this anime. And join the video-making bandwagon on it too, of course)
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