Wake up Hate

Alucard066 · Post by **Alucard066** » Fri Jul 25, 2008 11:56 am

My 4th AMV, hope you all like it and thanks for anyfeed back

Alucard066 · Post by **Alucard066** » Fri Jul 25, 2008 2:51 pm

please tell me what you think and be as brutal as you can with the feed back if possible PLZ

neorose · Post by **neorose** » Fri Jul 25, 2008 6:18 pm

For and action vid its boring. AR is off, Nice use of fansubs with no subtitles, not much flow to vid, bad use of effects, over all boring.

Work on clean source footage(buy DVDs, if non are around wait), work on AR, work on better use of effects, work on flow of vid to song.

2/5

neorose · Post by **neorose** » Fri Jul 25, 2008 6:19 pm

surfsama · Post by **surfsama** » Fri Jul 25, 2008 6:55 pm

It's not a bad AMV. You have some good scene selections and it's clean looking. There are technical issues and neorose correctly points those out.

I also agree if you were shooting for action it falls short with too many long drawn-out scenes playing through music flow and beat changes.

If you haven't already, read some of the tech guides on action-sync to help you tighten-up your vids.

Keep'em coming.

Alucard066 · Post by **Alucard066** » Fri Jul 25, 2008 7:11 pm

ty for the feedback, i will look into the "how to guides" tonight

leahzero · Post by **leahzero** » Fri Jul 25, 2008 7:24 pm

Alucard066 wrote:be as brutal as you can with the feed back

Your wish is my command.

- overuse of cheesy fades at beginning
- mismatched ARs in source
- poor footage quality
- pacing is way too slow for the song
- pacing doesn't follow dynamics in the music
- poor scene choice (action vid = show action plz, not epic facial closeups)
- lip sync is off and drawn out too long
- abrupt ending, no sense of buildup or closure
- it's fucking Naruto + Korn

3/10

neorose · Post by **neorose** » Fri Jul 25, 2008 10:35 pm

- it's fucking Naruto + Korn

That part made me laugh

Vivaldi · Post by **Vivaldi** » Fri Jul 25, 2008 10:45 pm

I don't think anybody's going to make a big deal about it since your last amv isn't even on the first page anymore, but techniquely you're supposed to wait at least one week between anouncement threads.

76 · Post by 76 » Fri Jul 25, 2008 11:06 pm

I remember that I downloaded a vid by you the other day.....but I can't remember what I thought about it...or even what it remotely was.....so....

/gets.

Would have to say...Quite boring.

All of the above reasons, save for those I do not undersand.

Bye! Good luck next time! ^_^