Project Yahweh [Capo]
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Gatherum
- Joined: Tue Aug 04, 2009 5:42 pm
- Location: Aurora CO
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Project Yahweh [Capo]
Please read the description. Everything one might need to know about it is in there.
Also, yes, this is my first (mini-)AMV.
If one does not wish to go through the process of downloading it, one can always watch it here on YouTube.
(Apologies if any part of this post is against any rules.)
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CodeZTM
- Spin Me Round
- Joined: Fri Mar 03, 2006 6:13 pm
- Status: Flapping Lips
- Location: Arkansas
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Re: Project Yahweh [Capo]
Review timez. =D
1) Lip flap can be easily masked out and make your video look more professional and well tuned. Especially in the beginning with the girl flapping away. =D
2) Slowing of speed at :15 was really noticable and kind of killed the flow you were going for.
3) At :17, you had a stray frame. Keeping it the same scene probably would have given it a better flow with what you were going for.
4) When you had those static pictures with the single strands of red? THAT was really artsy and nice. Kind of like the red strand of destiny thing, and I wish you'd gone for more of that effect in the actual moving video part. =D Because that was really noticeable and stood out in the video.
5) 1:06 - THIS is really well excecuted slow-mo. It wasn't too slow that it was painful to watch, but slow enough that we know it was done and effectively so.
6) I like the way you synced the video. The fades to black was well executed and had a great feel with the melencholy atmosphere. Same with the coloring, although I wished you'd done more like I described in 4.
7) Ef is ef is ef is ef. Conceptually, it wasn't anything new that somebody hasn't seen before And ef is especially overused around here, so I've seen everthing done with it. So conceptually speaking, it hurt, but the small artistic things in here really did it a small bit of justice.
I hate giving number scores, but this is a perfect example of 3.5/5. Above average, just brushing along a 4, but not quite there becuase of a few editing faux pas here and there.
Keep it up, I like how you did this, and I look forward to more from you.
1) Lip flap can be easily masked out and make your video look more professional and well tuned. Especially in the beginning with the girl flapping away. =D
2) Slowing of speed at :15 was really noticable and kind of killed the flow you were going for.
3) At :17, you had a stray frame. Keeping it the same scene probably would have given it a better flow with what you were going for.
4) When you had those static pictures with the single strands of red? THAT was really artsy and nice. Kind of like the red strand of destiny thing, and I wish you'd gone for more of that effect in the actual moving video part. =D Because that was really noticeable and stood out in the video.
5) 1:06 - THIS is really well excecuted slow-mo. It wasn't too slow that it was painful to watch, but slow enough that we know it was done and effectively so.
6) I like the way you synced the video. The fades to black was well executed and had a great feel with the melencholy atmosphere. Same with the coloring, although I wished you'd done more like I described in 4.
7) Ef is ef is ef is ef. Conceptually, it wasn't anything new that somebody hasn't seen before And ef is especially overused around here, so I've seen everthing done with it. So conceptually speaking, it hurt, but the small artistic things in here really did it a small bit of justice.
I hate giving number scores, but this is a perfect example of 3.5/5. Above average, just brushing along a 4, but not quite there becuase of a few editing faux pas here and there.
Keep it up, I like how you did this, and I look forward to more from you.