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Post by Warheart » Thu Dec 09, 2004 10:09 am

Yeah it´s me again I´d like to get some feedback on my [Akira] Tects amv. It´s a video I created before Archetypes, and now I´m finally able to show it in public. Please do not just write 3 words I´d like to read some constructive critism. My op won´t be to short as well. Note: I´ll write to op after I received mine just because I made some bad experiences here with people who didnt´t reply.

If you post your´s here before the weekend and leave me an op I´ll try to get yours done before sunday eve. But be advised I have some exams coming up next week so please don´t blame me if it takes a day longer.

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=49842

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Post by storyteller » Thu Dec 09, 2004 1:38 pm

Hi Warheart,

I can give you some constructive criticism. I am writing your opinion right now.

Nice vid.

Here is a video of mine that I would like you to review:

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=55959

(It is nowhere near as exciting as your video, but I still hope that it gives you a smile.)

Good luck with your exams,
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Post by Warheart » Thu Dec 09, 2004 5:15 pm

Thanks for your opinion. Fast and relieable :up:

I´ll dlding your video at the moment, to be honest I´ve never seen the anime before :oops:. This is the bad thing about op-exchange but I´ll take a look and watch it a few times so I can at least say something about the editing and quality.

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Post by storyteller » Thu Dec 09, 2004 5:34 pm

:lol: (Laughing at myself.)

There's the rub!

Still, no worries. 8-) I know that you will give it your best shake.

(If my video does come across as incomprehensible, then just let me know. I am sure we could work something out.)
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Post by Warheart » Fri Dec 10, 2004 1:43 am

Actually it´s quite funny and it´s not incomprehensible at all. So you´ll get your op at least untill sunday eve.

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Post by Warheart » Sat Dec 11, 2004 9:21 am

Yor op is up earlier than expected. Take a look at it ...

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Post by otbwavelength » Thu Dec 16, 2004 2:49 am

left you an op...

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Post by Warheart » Thu Dec 16, 2004 8:29 am

Thanks, as I mentioned in my reply I´m going to leave you an op within the next week.

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Post by otbwavelength » Thu Dec 16, 2004 9:22 am

i know, no rush

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