Desde mi Cielo - TritioAFB

[TritioAFB]

It's the first time I'm making this, so there's the new video already:





Desde mi Cielo or From my Heaven as you wish to call it

Old entry will be kept in the thread in case you haven't watched it:

Spoiler :

So long time not posting something here, let's get started today

[Shinzui IT]

nice one

[TritioAFB]

Thanks man

[ibabrak]

There were some scenes that were little out of place imo but overall it was a very nice and solid amv. Good job man

[-Kyros-]

Not bad
I think at some points you should focus on better synch (at some points I think you could do more) , and the final part I was not very convinced
however, you did a good job and put me curious to watch this series

[TritioAFB]

I was getting obsessed with the synch in the first betas, then relax in the finals

But yes, I'll keep it in mind for the future proyects. Thanks for the comments

[Hikado95]

not bad

[TritioAFB]

Gracias pana

[Animated]

or ? I think I'll prefer the first one for obvious reasons

So, my opinion on this. Good editing (I think I've seen better from you, doc!) but what bothered me the most is the linear storyline you showed us. Even though I couldn't understand the story of the video at all, it seemed like a collage of some anime sequences which were edited in a very unfitting action way. For example, the part at the lake with the boy and the girl: they were only looking each other and I was prepared for a massive fight with the kind of editing you used! Same goes with the wedding part and the boys fighting in the forest: you gave it so much tension, where there was none needed. Also, abrupt ending was abrupt Maybe it's just me that I don't like videos with only one anime used, but I believe this could have been much better - some clever ideas here and there, like the japanese text, but overally it was just average Take out your medical knives and show us what you can!

[CacoVenom]

go tritio, well you know good work, yao