La Fleur Du Destin (4th place/Big Contest 2013)

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La Fleur Du Destin (4th place/Big Contest 2013)

Post by Kitty-Galia » Thu May 16, 2013 11:38 am

1789, French Revolution.
A story about man and women who fought for peace and freedom of their country.
Vive la France!

NOTE: the character with blonde hair is a woman ^_^
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Re: La Fleur Du Destin

Post by post-it » Thu May 16, 2013 12:35 pm

getting by the character designs, you've taken a long time to Master those skills!

. you should be an Instructor of Special Effects .. nicely done ^__^

( I have been removed from Grading & Replying to the Answer Boards however, if this were not so; you would be my first Critique in the past five years worth analyzing. )
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Re: La Fleur Du Destin (Big Contest 2013)

Post by Shinzui IT » Thu May 16, 2013 4:30 pm

Nice one :up:
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Re: La Fleur Du Destin (Big Contest 2013)

Post by AceD » Thu May 16, 2013 5:50 pm

To be honest i was surprised the blond character was female. Reminded of Griffith in terms of a feminine looking male...

Still, technically a treat to watch....just not hooked.

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Re: La Fleur Du Destin (Big Contest 2013)

Post by post-it » Thu May 16, 2013 7:19 pm

AceD wrote:To be honest i was surprised the blond character was female.
:ying:
Spoiler :
I wasn't looking for it so I missed that! ... ... x_x .. crawls under the smallest pebble on the beach ... sorry about that ..

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Re: La Fleur Du Destin (Big Contest 2013)

Post by Koopiskeva » Tue May 21, 2013 8:05 pm

Thanks for clearing up the genders there :P Great compositing work!
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Re: La Fleur Du Destin (Big Contest 2013)

Post by imp » Wed May 22, 2013 2:39 am

read the note before watching it ^^

The video wasn't whatever it is that I was expecting. Quite beautiful, love the transition. And thought I didn't understand the lyrics the music seemed to fit perfectly.
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Re: La Fleur Du Destin (Big Contest 2013)

Post by pan_dbgt01 » Wed May 22, 2013 6:42 pm

Very cool. Love the story line and the editing :D

I need to learn some editing in a class some day :)

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Re: La Fleur Du Destin (Big Contest 2013)

Post by Pic4 » Thu May 23, 2013 11:36 am

One of my Top 5 from the BC. I love the atmosphere, but the story could be more transparent. I think it's too much driven by emotions and it could have more events. I mean the happening feels a bit flat for me: The most scenes are about love feelings between the couple and the main events are: the woman spits blood (I don't know why) and they both fight in the civil war and die.

Maybe I miss something because I don't understand the lyrics. Nevertheless your expression is awesome and many editors could learn from you a lot. Btw on the one side the song fits well to the drawing style, but on the other side it feels weird to see french people acting to an Italian song. :dino:
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Re: La Fleur Du Destin (Big Contest 2013)

Post by Fizziks » Thu May 23, 2013 8:12 pm

Great story, and awesome use off effects! This video is really well done! :up:
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