Akame Ga Kill! - ULTRAnumb

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Forsaken221
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Akame Ga Kill! - ULTRAnumb

Post by Forsaken221 » Thu Oct 01, 2015 8:50 pm

Hello everyone, here to share the second AMV I've made! My first amv was also an Akame Ga Kill piece (really enjoyed the show plus I had the footage to work with) and I'm looking to get some feedback. Still a newbie to the whole AMV scene and I really want to know what I could learn to do better. For anyone that's curious this was a project that on and off again, due to school/work/ect, took me around a month to complete using Sony Vegas Pro 13. I know I'm slow :P Anyway I've been having a lot of fun editing thus far and I hope you enjoy watching as well.




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Re: Akame Ga Kill! - ULTRAnumb

Post by Mol » Fri Oct 02, 2015 3:34 pm

Hey, not bad beginnings!. I liked when you tried to match sounds/ stuff from song, but it wasn't so good when it didn't follow general speed/amount or sounds in some way, might wanna pick an lighter song for getting used to stuff like that.
Still better than that MMO.
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Post by Xophilarus » Mon Oct 05, 2015 11:49 am

Definitely good for a second AMV. I do believe this song may have not been the best choice while you are still trying to get into editing because most of the pacing definitely felt slower than the song. Also be careful with your masks. I understand it is a satisfying feeling, but most of the masks here seem to break the flow when they should increase it. One thing I would suggest is in scenes in the show that do not have a lot of natural motion on their own is to add some camera motion, normally just in the forms of zooming continuously in or out. This helps keep a sense of movement and flow going in the video ^^ Look forward to see where you go from here :D

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Post by Forsaken221 » Tue Oct 06, 2015 12:12 pm

Thanks for the heads up and tips, this song was definitely a bit daunting to edit with. Think I'll pick a slower song to try and get the hang of camera movement. Thanks again :)

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Post by pan_dbgt01 » Tue Oct 06, 2015 8:48 pm

Good editing sense. I liked the transitions and effects. I like that you lip synced as well.

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