[AMV] Tokyo Ghoul - Cynics & Critics

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[AMV] Tokyo Ghoul - Cynics & Critics

Post by Val2612 » Sat Apr 16, 2016 3:39 pm

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Sorry English isn't my native language .

Hi everybody ! Here is my new AMV :) . I liked the first season of this anime, and when I heard this song, which sound a bit strange, I though it could fit well with this anime . I worked about 25-30 hours to make this video .

Thanks for watching, and if you liked it, here's a lot to my other AMV on youtube :
https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=P ... ztE1uGiimE


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Re: [AMV] Tokyo Ghoul - Cynics & Critics

Post by Kireblue » Sat Apr 16, 2016 10:09 pm

this was a pretty good combo, but I think that you went way overboard with speeding up your clips. It caused a lot of your scenes to look really unnatural, and some were even hard to completely grasp what was happening because of how fast the movements were. I also feel that you overused the TV simulator effect in this (although it worked really nice at 1:39). So my advice to you would be to focus more on syncing the natural movement in your scenes and a little less on syncing with effects and sped up clips.

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Re: [AMV] Tokyo Ghoul - Cynics & Critics

Post by Val2612 » Wed Apr 20, 2016 9:23 am

Okay ! Thank you very much for the advices, i'll considerer them to improve my work for the next time :)
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Re: [AMV] Tokyo Ghoul - Cynics & Critics

Post by phenol » Wed Apr 20, 2016 11:46 am

I think you prefer making some action AMV. If you can try more type of creating, maybe it will be easy to improve your ability of making AMV and get more style (not be limited in a single style). My native language isn't English too. Maybe my word is hard to understand.

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Re: [AMV] Tokyo Ghoul - Cynics & Critics

Post by ShadowCore89 » Wed Apr 20, 2016 8:37 pm

wow! Your amv is pretty well synced, I for one enjoyed the static effect. good job!

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Re: [AMV] Tokyo Ghoul - Cynics & Critics

Post by Val2612 » Thu Apr 21, 2016 7:41 am

So, phenol, I understood what you meant dw ;) . It's true, every music video I've made for the moment are actions, but i'm currently working on a "dramatic" one, with the anime Erased . I feel that it's very different than any AMV I've done, so I think you're right when you say that try a new style will help me to improve myself . Thank you for the advice ;) .

And ShadowCore89, thank you too, it encourages me a lot to see positive comments on the forum and on Youtube :) !
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